Subject: Spoilery guess
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Posted on: 2016-11-20 11:32:00 UTC

But first:

Scene 18:
I shook my head slightly, taking completely off-guard by her breezy dismissal of what I'd thought was her entire point.
Shouldn’t that be "taken"?

And then you'll need to join me in in bed and put on an enthusiastic show of making up for it.
Cheating with the word count again?

Scene 19
It was even more distressing to know that the black shield that popped into existence to effortlessly fend off Golden Monglian energy-lashes had been under my control all along, had I only know it.
Shouldn’t these be "Mongolian" and "known"?

Scene 23
You've got another thing coming if you thing you can turn me over to your government.
Tell me that this is intentional!


Well, this guy obviously doesn’t speak Japanese, so they are in New Gondor? Small doubt, because it may be too far from the Australias, but it just fits too good. It may also be New Arnor, but the big city at the mouth of a river at the eastern coast looks like Christchurch.

HG

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