Subject: That's amazing.
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Posted on: 2016-11-18 21:22:00 UTC

I have no regrets.

Congrats! A two-week NaNo is one of those elusive things - they happen very rarely, but when they do, you know you've really accomplished something.

As for me, I've stalled out a bit today, because I have to force them to actually do stuff instead of sitting around arguing. :-/ Dang plot.

I'm not sure whether Gravity's Embrace is above your limits or not, really. The innuendo sticks around, but it never gets any worse - actually, it decreases quite a bit as time goes by. And (minor spoilers) I made a conscious decision never to let it, y'know, actually lead to anything. (I don't think the first-person narration has actually described or even mentioned a single piece of Areatha's body - for all that she's only had clothes on for one chapter out of seven!) So if you were worried it would get worse, then you should be okay. If what was already there bothered you... then you probably don't want to read it.

hS

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