Subject: Thoughts and review
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Posted on: 2018-01-18 23:22:00 UTC
- Ix giving up her bed for Lotte is probably going to come up later, isn't it?
- Shame about the knee, thank goodness Ix has magic
- Using a wand to summon the TV remote would be pretty awesome, I agree with Ix there
- Ok, yeah, that is going be an argument at some point
- Lotte massively falling down the ranks at Overwatch makes sense, and now I'm wondering if she'll earn her way back up
- Poor Ix. (re: the indecision about New Cal)
- I can see why Ix'd want to avoid making a scene, given her backstory
- "how different she was". Ouch, kinda.
- Ok, yeah, general comment now that I'm on the clothing-picking scene: I do hope Ix can somehow work through all this crap she's been through and the self-hatred and the like
- Ix does seem generally down around the bottom of page two
- But still, kisses and relationship fluff!
- Oh. Ix is going to come out as genderfluid.
- Lotte is doing a very good job of reacting to this. Then again, she already knew.
- Ok, so now Ix is going to do the "I'm worried you'll break up with me because werewolf" angst thing
- ... Charlotte, if only you know who was writing you
- Charlotte getting sunburned was really funny for some reason. Probably the rapid mood shift.
- Awww, necklace thing
- Why doesn't Ix want [Lotte] to look down?
- Yeah. Right after morphing wasn't quite the right time, I think.
- Huh. They might be getting married at some point.
- It's nice that Lotte is being considerate of Ix
Overall: That was a nice interlude. It did a good job of advancing the relationship and gave me good windows into both Ix and Lotte's heads.
- Tomash