Subject: Thoughts and review
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Posted on: 2018-01-18 23:22:00 UTC

  • Ix giving up her bed for Lotte is probably going to come up later, isn't it?
    - Shame about the knee, thank goodness Ix has magic
    - Using a wand to summon the TV remote would be pretty awesome, I agree with Ix there
    - Ok, yeah, that is going be an argument at some point
    - Lotte massively falling down the ranks at Overwatch makes sense, and now I'm wondering if she'll earn her way back up
    - Poor Ix. (re: the indecision about New Cal)
    - I can see why Ix'd want to avoid making a scene, given her backstory
    - "how different she was". Ouch, kinda.
    - Ok, yeah, general comment now that I'm on the clothing-picking scene: I do hope Ix can somehow work through all this crap she's been through and the self-hatred and the like
    - Ix does seem generally down around the bottom of page two
    - But still, kisses and relationship fluff!
    - Oh. Ix is going to come out as genderfluid.
    - Lotte is doing a very good job of reacting to this. Then again, she already knew.
    - Ok, so now Ix is going to do the "I'm worried you'll break up with me because werewolf" angst thing
    - ... Charlotte, if only you know who was writing you
    - Charlotte getting sunburned was really funny for some reason. Probably the rapid mood shift.
    - Awww, necklace thing
    - Why doesn't Ix want [Lotte] to look down?
    - Yeah. Right after morphing wasn't quite the right time, I think.
    - Huh. They might be getting married at some point.
    - It's nice that Lotte is being considerate of Ix

    Overall: That was a nice interlude. It did a good job of advancing the relationship and gave me good windows into both Ix and Lotte's heads.

    - Tomash

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