Subject: Re: mission
Posted on: 2020-01-08 20:26:42 UTC

I finally had a chance to read this, and it was a nicely done mission overall.

I like the author's note pointing out the better sides of the fic at the end.

The assassination had good dramatic tension.

One minor problem I found is what's probably a missing word in "Ashton gets some toys he really shouldn’t have and/or break the laws of physics."

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