Subject: To Calliope on her story
Posted on: 2020-09-23 03:39:31 UTC

Honestly, I really empathize with Miria, especially sometime in the middle of the story with the phone call. I get especially agitated when interrupted while I'm doing something I consider important. I also really like the way you used italics to show sarcasm, as I have a bit of trouble picking it up otherwise.

Although, it is a sequel, and readers may not have a clear picture of exactly what's going on if they haven't read the other stories in the series.

Also I thought at first that Miria was using a typewriter

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