Subject: That was fun.
Posted on: 2021-06-18 15:16:13 UTC

The sandwich-toasting was a strong opening, and I like the "next to the skeletons" line and its reaction. I also liked the way you handled the not-quite-Suvian - though I would've liked to see how she ended up! (And possible how Dr. Glocktopus reacted to having an angry, bewildered, charging woman dropped on him with no warning.)

The thing about letting the fic shape the mission is... well, we're not MSTers, so it helps to separate us from that, but also it's more fun to read. ^_^ A mission that doesn't end with 'and then they stabbed her dead the end' is always a nice change, so if you've got good reason to do it, go for it!


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