Subject: Thoughts
Posted on: 2021-06-19 03:28:42 UTC

  • I liked the sandwich bit at the beginning
  • The casual mention of the skeletons was pretty funny
  • The polymorph bit was neat - it's nice to see the two different magic systems interacting on a day-to-day level like this
  • Interesting thing with the fic not being that bad
  • Dr. Glocktopus :). They've definitely got HQ vibes
  • I'm liking the callback with the sandwich

Overall, the mission was well-done and did a good job of showing what's bad and good about the fic, while also having its own independent plot. It also fits pretty well into the PPC as a universe. So, ... keep things up, I'm looking forward to more from you.

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