Subject: A matter of style
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Posted on: 2010-03-11 17:53:00 UTC

I return! (Okay, so I only vanished for the hellmonth known as February, but who cares? I'm back now!) And, not only do I return, but I return with a question.

I'm thinking about probably writing at least one fanfic story for a computer game I play a lot. (I'm a nerd. I enjoy being a nerd. And yes, I write fanfic for computer games.) This isn't so much because I adore the game too much to live without it as that the present standard of writing on that site is... well, I believe atrocious might be putting a touch mildly. In all the corners of the internet I've visited, this place may be one of the worst in terms of abuse to the English language. So I want to at least submit something decent, if only to have one thing up there that I can bear to read.

Now, this game, like many games, has a system of leveling up based on accumulated experience points. You start at level one and end the game at level fifty. Your level determines the spells you can cast, the enemies you fight, etc. A lot of people who write stories based on this use the level terminology. "I was a level twenty-seven and not in Marleybone yet, even though my best friend Sabrina FireWeave was a level twenty-four and already there," for instance. I find this obnoxious and it throws me brutally out of the story. On the other hand, it's a part of the game, not something imported by the badfic writers.

How would you deal with this? Should I just use it, or can anyone think of a better alternative?

--anamia

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