Subject: The title?
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Posted on: 2013-04-23 15:49:00 UTC

It's actually an interesting concept... the problem is that it reminds me altogether too much of Chivalry Reborn, a (in my opinion) Human-In-Equestira goodfic.

As in, "human turns out to be descended from superbeings, who'da thought." And CR does it well; and despite being an alicorn, the OC is NOT a sue. He doesn't have instant mastery of anything; I think I got about ten chapters in and he still hadn't done well in magic.

Telekinesis magic. Which I'm pretty sure is the most basic kind in MLP.

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