Subject: For starters...
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Posted on: 2009-12-21 03:37:00 UTC

Luna is so out of character I'm not even sure it's still her; a non-canon fifth Hogwarts house for speshul people, which has no Head of House and no uniform; the fact that someone seemed to know Luna and her friends would go there before the Sorting Ceremony; a wand made out of silver and other Magical Mary-Sue Artifacts; a Cute Animal Friend (Othello the Miniature Eagle Owl); making dignified adults (i.e. Mr. Ollivander and Madam Hooch) faint at "Luna's" awesomeness; and of course the poor spelling, punctuation and grammar.

Those are just the ones I can remember off the top of my head.

~Neshomeh

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