What? I even brought a stamp.
...Fine, I'll do this the proper way.
Do I know you? Oh yeah. I seen you in Discord, like, all the time. I've bounced ideas off you (I trust you enough to be a story adviser; does this mean I trust you with your own? Heck yes.), I've RPed with your characters. I got to watch them develop as you readied for Permission. I like 'em. You got plans to rein in their more OP sides. Gold star.
Can you write? You got betas. Good show. I've seen your unedited RP posts and you know how to do SPaG there, too. And your prompts and bios look solid; there were a few punctuation errors, but nothing major aside from using carrot brackets to show your characters thinking. They're not Andalites; use italics instead, for thoughts and for the Flowers. Flowers don't use quotations for their speech. Make sure to italicize those continua, too. :) Basically, SPaG is mostly good, and nothing that a beta or two can't catch.
As for storytelling, I think you're good. The control prompt was a bit lacking in funny, but it was engaging nonetheless, and it was a nice showing of how your agents met.
The second prompt was better; I laughed when Apecian fell in the Floating Hyacinth's tank.
And the fic to spork: I took one look and NOPEd out. I think we're done here.
*takes out sword and taps your shoulders* It is my duty and honor to announce Sir Granz, Knight of Plort!,
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Permission Granted. by
on 2017-02-11 06:39:00 UTC
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Best of luck! by
on 2017-02-11 06:32:00 UTC
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If it helps, I think it's good as granted. Ticks all the marks, and it's entertaining. Nicely done.
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Good luck, Granz. Good luck. by
on 2017-02-11 06:24:00 UTC
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Good bloody luck, mate.
Get permission or not, know that I still reckon you're a bloody good writer, at the end of it. Plenty of us do, in fact! Least, in the Discord, where all that RP stuff is.
Good luck, Granz! Good luck.
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Alright. Here I go. by
on 2017-02-11 06:21:00 UTC
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After much seclusion within the Discord chat and much conversation with my betas, I present to you, oh Most Esteemed Permission Givers, my Request. I must say, I completely ignored the word count recommendations, and I apologize for this.
My agent bios:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a2G0Dm2VQQe79uq1rU5xspnzO4cySOjxJ-aoDr5IGY/edit?usp=sharing
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GpIoRkjnh9a1Y9OFFrm9jd6QKCIYYvgYJ2iMf0HI/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GpIoRkjnh9a1Y9OFFrm9jd6QKCIYYvgYJ2iMf0HI/edit?usp=sharing
My control prompt:
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mvjcodke2wWvGQpd3a6qLsuY9gVxLhwQIEnIqYj0/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mvjcodke2wWvGQpd3a6qLsuY9gVxLhwQIEnIqY_j0/edit?usp=sharing
My random prompt (1-2-1):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nF1gD00RbrC73QYqSaRjJNQ-aXhQ8Rtc0sS3PmJJRSw/edit?usp=sharing
I thank the most estimable Larfen J. Stocke, esq, Storme Hawk, SkarmorySilver, Calliope, and DCCCV. I thank you all for all your contributions.
For my first badfic, I have my sights set on this: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11726234/1/Sweet-Dreams-Otaku
Either genuinely terrible or a terrible parody, but either way, drek. Charges include overuse of capitalization, particularly in the chapter titles, misunderstanding of the connotations of certain Japanese words, driving canons out of character, misunderstanding Mary Sues as a whole, driving canons out of character, being a total brat, irritating and pointless Author's Note's, driving canons out of character, a seeming hatred of dialogue tags, and, of course, driving canons out of character. Replacement may figure into it, but it will require a tad more assessment.
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Have returned after a bit of a long break. by
on 2017-02-11 05:11:00 UTC
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Hello everyone again.
I like to apologize for being inactive for so long. I had a few problems with getting into here for a while, and I have been spending some time trying to get back in the Lounge, as I too my time to get used to the customs of the PPC.
I just want to ask if I could ask for the instant-invite key back into the Lounge at Discord, because I have lost my previous account, and made a new one.
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Welcome aBoard! by
on 2017-02-11 04:30:00 UTC
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Have one of my own shed feathers, and a Spider Donut recipe! (Don't worry, the spider didn't. :P)
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Whellkomn! by
on 2017-02-11 03:59:00 UTC
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Hi,
Here's a ghrene ppehnn. Enjoy.
SECRET MESSAGE 6
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Beta or concrit requested (not for me, for someone else) by
on 2017-02-11 02:42:00 UTC
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I'm working on a crossover on FFN, and one of my readers basically told me that he was inspired to write a story in the same style. I looked over at his profile--and found that his writing needs help. I already spoke to him about it, and he's willing to accept some concrit, or even a beta, for his story.
If anyone is familiar with Bakugan: Battle Brawlers, or if you're good at giving concrit and aren't averse to doing some research on the Bakugan Wiki, could you please hop over and give a hand? I would gladly do so myself, but I know that once I start meddling, I'd go all-in and start betaing: not something I think that I have the time for at this point.
The fic: Bakugan Plan B by Bakuganfan01
Summary: New Vestroia is in danger! Aliens who call themselves "Vestals" have invaded New Vestroia and enslaved almost all Bakugan. Drago decides to immediately call the Brawlers for help. Will they save New Vestroia?
From what I could gather after skimming the first chapter, it appears to be an AU of New Vestroia (the second season) with some elements of Gundalian Invaders (the third season) mixed in. So far, I've caught
* script format
* numerals instead of words, and
* underdescribed settings.
If anyone is willing to help, please feel free to shoot him a PM, and tell him that son-of-heaven176 (note the dashes instead of underscores) sent you. Thank you.
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Newbie! *glomp* *poke* by
on 2017-02-11 01:06:00 UTC
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Hello, and welcome aBoard! For your newbie gift, take this plate of freshly-made SPaGhetti!
If you haven't yet read it, may I point you towards the Constitution? It and the Original Series are pretty much the only required reading around these parts.
Another useful resource you might use is Discord chatroom.
Hope you like it here!
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YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!! by
on 2017-02-10 23:47:00 UTC
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THE NEXT CHAPTER! I AM MUCH EXCITE! THANKEE THANKEE THANKEE!
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On occasion. by
on 2017-02-10 23:38:00 UTC
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If this is more your speed: https://youtu.be/BLwREAX4d2A
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Say, Wozzy... by
on 2017-02-10 23:36:00 UTC
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Do you listen to stuff that isn't... discordant?
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Hi there! by
on 2017-02-10 23:31:00 UTC
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Welcome to this madhouse, Oh She Who Has A Name That Will Probably Invoke A Large Number Of Minis. I think I'll call you OSWHANTWPIALNOM for short.
Now that you're here, have this Royal Ice Cream Container! Strong enough to withstand a nuclear blast, light enough to carry in one arm, and magical enough to never run out of ice cream and always have the flavor you want!
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Hello there! by
on 2017-02-10 23:24:00 UTC
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Welcome aBoard! Here, have that... I'm not exactly sure what it is but you can have it.
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Ooh, newbie! by
on 2017-02-10 23:24:00 UTC
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Unfortunately, I seem to be the only person around with no otherworldly goodies on hand, so I'll just set up tables for other people to place theirs on. Welcome!
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Rero rero rero! by
on 2017-02-10 23:22:00 UTC
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I mean, uh...
*swallows cherry*
Hi, welcome to the PPC! We're all full of nutiness here, so come on in and make yourself at home!
Oh, and have some welcome music: https://youtu.be/wIrvTF2AR7A
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Hello, Bob. by
on 2017-02-10 23:20:00 UTC
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Welcome to the madhouse. Sanity best left outside, etc. Please have this nice bit of music and the best hamster.
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Salutations from the new meat! by
on 2017-02-10 23:05:00 UTC
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Hello! I'm Khryssty - my goal in devising this screen name was spelling a fairly normal name as extravagantly as possible - and I just thought I'd poke my head in and say hi. I've been a casual appreciator of PPC works for some time now, and I'd love to get involved with all of these great fellow writers.
Usually, in my free time, I write fiction or play video games. Recently, I actually finished something! Whoopee! I'm still hammering away at a persistent motivation problem that I feel like I'm making progress with.
I'm enthusiastically committed to all things Versailles Philharmonic Quintet, especially involving the vocalist, KAMIJO, and I have this Huge Unifying Theory that ties together the lore of the band's songs with some things from KAMIJO's solo project to create this big honking backstory. Deranged, I know. I was probably a conspiracy theorist in a past life. I tried making it into fanfic once. It didn't work out at all. I might go back. Maybe. Unlikely.
I'm also fairly knowledgeable in JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, MapleStory, Overwatch, and Undertale, and I have some other bits and pieces of fictional knowledge scattered about in my brain.
I'm a high school student born and raised in the US of A. Feel free to send me questions, comments, or otherworldly virtual knickknacks, as I hear is the custom on this here Board. I look forward to getting to know everyone!
(female, pronouns are she/her)
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As of now, a sequel isn't planned. by
on 2017-02-10 22:19:00 UTC
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Also because... well... considering how long I took to write this, there would be probably no one interested in Madoka Magica left by the time I finish the sequel.
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Yes! New chapter! by
on 2017-02-10 18:32:00 UTC
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Rot13'd to avoid spoilers.
Ununun, gung jnf tbbq. Abj, jung jvyy or Ubzhen? Checyr be Oynpx Qrivy? Naljnlf, fur'f whfg orvat njrfbzr gurer.
Tbbq jnl gb qrny jvgu Fnlnxn gurer gbb.Naq abj Xlbfhxr vf bhg bs gur cvpgher, bajneqf jvgu Xlbxb!Abj V gel gb vzntvar Ryfn Znevn jnivat n juvgr synt... Rnfvre guna V gubhtug.
Naq... Anabun Gnxnzvpuv naq Ubzhen Nxrzv jbexvat gbtrgure, gur sbezre tvivat gur ynggre gur bccbeghavgl gb pbyyrpg gur zbfg cbjreshy nefrany rire...
Jvyy jr rira unir n cynarg yrsg jura gurl'er qbar? Jnychetvfanpug pbhyq npghnyyl gb fheeraqre gbb gurer.
Jryy, tbbq yhpx jvgu ynfg puncgre. Nal cebwrpg nobhg n frdhry, znlor?
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Congrats. (nm) by
on 2017-02-10 18:01:00 UTC
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Thank you. (nm) by
on 2017-02-10 16:14:00 UTC
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Having closely read this... by
on 2017-02-10 15:56:00 UTC
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It looks fine to me, and I don't have any concrete comment to add.
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Plugging the new chapter of IrregularS! by
on 2017-02-10 11:13:00 UTC
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AKA the crazy Puella Magi Madoka Magica and Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha crossover I'mn writing.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8162205/11/IrregularS
As the Chapter 1 disclaimer says: This fanfic is trying to mix epic battles, serious themes and silliness. Possibility of crazyness. Read at your own risk.
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Thanks for your signature. by
on 2017-02-10 08:54:00 UTC
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On your other point: I can't pretend to know why the chat community didn't raise this as a problem earlier. The only experience I can work from is my own, which you can read over in the previous thread if you choose. Essentially, the word 'harassment' has different meanings to different people. To me - and to the Constitution as presently written - it means 'repeatedly attacking, bullying, and demeaning someone'.
That wasn't the sense in which Iximaz and Tomash were using it; their version is also accurate. But bear in mind where you are - the PPC has never been noted for consisting of highly-stable, socially-adept types. A large proportion of us are frankly inept when it comes to interpersonal skills (such as, say, me).
So yeah, I think it's actually reasonable to assume that some of our people - which includes members down to and below age 13, many of whom are awestruck by the presence of Big Names like Iximaz - aren't going to get that 'try and be wherever Iximaz is and talk to them all the time' is a form of harassment. I don't know whether that's the situation with GlarnWhatsit, but it feels like it.
My view has always been that the best way to prevent bad behaviour is to make it clear that it is bad, in advance. Cut things off at the start, and you never have to resort to punishment.
hS