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What do you think? I had a little trouble writing the scene where Barricade's caught by the bolas-harpoon: had to clear some clutter and cut out some of the internal panicking.

However, I got in what I wanted and even a bit more. Of course, it needs the right soundtrack, a little SFX, but you can only do so much on paper without it turning into a script.

Well, "Nnngahh" isn't quite as bad as giving someone nightmares for years to come...

Thanks for the clicky-link.

...biological impossibilities. What is the sparkle caused by? Do sparklevamps have some mica-rich substance running in their veins in lieu of blood? If so, what purpose does it serve? How did it get there? Sparklevamps have no fangs. Normal human teeth are inadequate for piercing skin and flesh efficiently; therefore, sparklevamps must have to carry a pair of scalpels with which they can inflict the traditional double bite marks. However, no mention is made of this.
And then there's the thing where Bella gets pregnant...

Mmmmm, then I came to the right place.... *cackles madly*

1) The average draenei seems to be somewhere between 7' and 7'6" (males are not much taller than females, although they're much bulkier).  Prophet Velen is described as towering at least a half head over the tallest of his guards.  In game...well, here you go.

2) They got into the story and out before the Wrath Cadets actually spawned.  If the consequences of such actions are unknown, I'd be glad to write 'em.

3) I believe it was LQ at one point.  Not sure what it is now.

... so speed and efficiency might just save the day :) And then you hang onto the resurrected canon somewhere, let the story continue, get all the charges, and then reintroduce them after exorcism and neuralysing or SUe slaying or whatever :D

Because as I said, this happens in the second paragraph of the story. So it kind of comes at you right out of the gate.

I figured that was what would be the case (I really don't like this story, either. Sokka's death, along with the complete derailment of the entire finale of the show, is only serving as a momentary excuse to launch into full-blown Royal Family incest. YECH).

Well, if the canon's not actually meant to be dead, and is being killed in the background, I'd suggest one or both of your agents taking a detour and saving said canon. But if worse comes to worst, just get the corpse to Medical quickly.

I like Eragon as well (book only, also Twilight hate) and it's always good to see someone else who's willing to PPC the series.

So. :)

That is, basically, the direction my fic is going... basically in a few directions:

-After everything is settled, Simmons reveals that the guys in charge of the codenames (the NBE label having been scrapped) are both Herberttes and have, I quote, "A sick sense of humour" in giving certain characters near-prphetic labels.

-the effect of a humanized Allspark (in the baby) going off is signified by the eyes becoming an incandesant blue-within-blue, and a blue that is closer to autobot optics than the human shade.

-Starscream is still going to be an underhanded backstabber in this version, but more by sin of ommission than outright deceit: letting Prime and his group hurl themselves against the Big Bad, get scragged, the 'Cons stay back and beat the the Bad through technology, hail Optimus and the Autobots as martyrs in public while being glad that they're out of the picture. Mix this in with a bit of religous fanaticism based in his "former life" and you're dealing with a dangerous enemy and an even more dangerous ally.

But besides that, I just finished up by first big fight scene and I'd like some constructive criticism, so, if people would be so kind as to review, heres the obligatory shameless pluggage:

http://community.livejournal.com/transficsation/429748.html

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4695216/9/TransformersStarscreamAscendant

I hope you enjoy... and if anything is too egregious, let me know.

What's the protocol on handling canons being actively killed by the story? In the second paragraph of the work I'm trying to make into my third mission, it relates that "[Sokka] had been killed in a show of base brutality."

I like you.


Mine now.

*steals away!*

Have a winged kitten and an evil cheese stick!

But I don't think there'd be a problem posting it on the LJ? *says the person with no authority whatsoever and next to no idea about the LJ and it's workings*

Have a coffeemaker.

I must say, this is a good first try! Glad you recruited the sniper. And giving the Eredar!Sue to Kil'Jaeden, that was one of the best things you can do.

-Love, Wik.

Dunno anything about the given canon, though the mission still seems to be pretty good. Nice work. Out of curiosity, just how tall is this Prophet Velen supposed to be exactly? Also, I seem to be unable to find the continuum's mini-type in the mission for some reason or other, probably general inattentiveness...

Is that FFN profile you posted in the guestbook of the Link's Queen shrine really LQ? I ended up there through the Blue Soap archive website for some reason.

Try them, they're delicious!