Subject: I'm not a Pern fan, but...
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Posted on: 2018-11-17 06:22:00 UTC

There's something very moving about someone listening to (what to them is certainly) ancient music after a bereavement. You've captured the mood well, especially with the song choice. This may fade, it seems to say, but it will still be real, it will still have happened, and for all that it will pass the pain you are feeling is real and valid and okay. I think that's what I like about the use of telepathy in this; it allows you to explore an emotional connection without either party being able to hide it, and gives them both a chance to express private vulnerabilities, private griefs.

Really, really good stuff. Not that that's a surprise. =]

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