Subject: I like this a lot.
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Posted on: 2018-11-17 00:04:00 UTC

I like the way you sort of show us everything at the beginning, but we still have to read to the end for all the pieces to fall into the right places. All the little details about the tools he's using and the bits of tech he's using them on are great. I don't know for sure what they all are, but they're applied with such precision that I can guess, and that I have no doubt you know exactly what you're talking about. I can even visualize the project fairly well, or at least I think I could if I gave it a bit more time to gel. (I have a bad habit of skimming description to get to the dialogue/action, so that's definitely my failing, not yours.) Swords to ploughshares is a theme I can absolutely get behind, too. Or stasers to megaflora incubators. {= )

I now want to know all about megaflora on high radiation worlds. ^_^

Always good to see you posting!

~Neshomeh

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