Subject: That makes sense.
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Posted on: 2018-11-19 03:56:00 UTC

I agree that, story-wise, including all of that stuff would be beside the point. If this were part of a longer arc about their relationship, then it would be relevant, but as a concise one-shot about remembering and mourning, not so much.

It's been a while since I checked in with the prompts, since I haven't written one (or much of anything else) in some time, so I've certainly missed things you've established in previous pieces. It's to your credit that I don't feel like I have. I can jump back in feeling invested, and everything required to interpret what happened between scenes is there. I was just worried and wanted to know everything would work out and be okay in the end. {= )

I love my angst, too, but I'm an optimist, dammit. The point of putting characters in a hole is to see them claw their way back out again, because they CAN. And so can we all... if we're determined and lucky and maybe someone throws a rope and we're not to damn stubborn to take it. {= )

~Neshomeh

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