Subject: Cicada's second draft
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Posted on: 2019-07-30 19:31:00 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IzTd2dXFXj96b-ZikhWSjKJcOoJ7aTiV6CXsvVQXtEo/edit?usp=sharing
After looking at some of the suggestions, I wrote a second draft. If anyone has more suggestions, I'd love to hear them!

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