Subject: I liked it!
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Posted on: 2019-10-13 11:30:00 UTC

This story really shone when it focused on Kaitlyn and Selene’s reactions to each other. Nice shoutout to Jay and Acacia—the mission definitely felt like a throwback to their missions. :) I loved the ending where the mini ate the tape recorders—I genuinely laughed out loud at that.

(Typo spotted: “Minas Minas Tirith gleaned around them”—I think that’s supposed to be “gleamed”?

“Are the flowers rapunzels, by any change?" Change-> chance?)

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