Subject: That was good
Posted on: 2019-11-03 23:12:43 UTC

I liked how the cookies affected Elena - it was a nice twists.

I also like that you pointed out some of the good parts of the fic.

Overall, there was a good balance of pointing out problems with the fic and agent interaction stuff, and (as best I can tell) did a good job of showing the problems with the fic without going in to too much detail.

Reply Return to messages