Subject: On behalf of your characters: Ouch!
Posted on: 2019-11-04 00:49:50 UTC

(And on your behalf, for that matter. I'm glad you pulled through, though!)

This was a good way of handling those serious charges - and the badfic's endorsement of non-con. It also played up the contrast between your agents more as the mission went on, which was good.

I did spot one repetition as I was reading, though: "I don’t know know what’s gotten into you, but I’m not doing anything more until it passes.”

Was the first know included for emphasis? That could be neat, if it was intended.

Thank you for writing! =D

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