Subject: Kudosed it earlier but now I have time to write a comment, so:
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Posted on: 2023-01-08 23:58:09 UTC

Reading Gall's character voice really made this mission enjoyable! And haha, Derik, sorry about the musical number, but it's pretty neat that you got some relevant charges in there! I was a little bit thrown by Derik's song lyrics being in blockquotes like the fic text, but I guess the italics helped differentiate it a little more?

I remember the taunt waste joke when you first workshopped it and it's still hilarious. Great job!

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