Subject: Commented on AO3, but: that was fun. ^_^ (nm)
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Posted on: 2023-01-18 15:25:52 UTC
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New Derik & Gall mission! DMS, Avengers (MCU). by
on 2023-01-04 21:56:09 UTC
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(With apologies to Lily for having a plug right on top of hers. ^_^; )
"Kitty Fever" (also on AO3), featuring a sex-crazed catgirl Sue at the speed of sound! Thanks to Ekwy for beta'ing.
This one's from Gall's point of view, so it's less introspective and angst-filled than my usual stuff. It was fun to write. I hope you enjoy it!
~Neshomeh
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Commented on AO3, but: that was fun. ^_^ (nm) by
on 2023-01-18 15:25:52 UTC
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re: mission (at last!) by
on 2023-01-12 03:55:14 UTC
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Yeeeesss. {= D by
on 2023-01-12 17:36:58 UTC
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Kudosed it earlier but now I have time to write a comment, so: by
on 2023-01-08 23:58:09 UTC
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Reading Gall's character voice really made this mission enjoyable! And haha, Derik, sorry about the musical number, but it's pretty neat that you got some relevant charges in there! I was a little bit thrown by Derik's song lyrics being in blockquotes like the fic text, but I guess the italics helped differentiate it a little more?
I remember the taunt waste joke when you first workshopped it and it's still hilarious. Great job!
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Thanks! by
on 2023-01-10 04:29:28 UTC
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Have read, what thoughts I had are in the AO3 comments (nm) by
on 2023-01-07 00:50:33 UTC
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Thanks! (nm) by
on 2023-01-07 05:29:05 UTC
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Nessie returns! by
on 2023-01-05 00:21:01 UTC
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Man, how awesome it is to see you write again. About the fic though… yikes.
Some issues: in the mobile version of the site, the floating box on the left side forces the text into a narrow collumn on the right. Is there a way to fix this?
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Re. mobile by
on 2023-01-05 00:56:12 UTC
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I read AO3. by
on 2023-01-05 01:51:41 UTC
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So as to be the first to give kudos. Also, forgot to say it earlier, but I loved the “taunt waste” gag.
—Ls
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OMG! by
on 2023-01-05 00:14:42 UTC
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takes a break from messing with character.ai to look at the Board
GASP!
Neshomeh wrote another story!
Alright, gonna go read it now.
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Whatcha doing on character.ai? (nm) by
on 2023-01-05 01:48:37 UTC
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Experimenting. by
on 2023-01-05 02:11:00 UTC
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Mostly I want to see what the AI is capable of as well as what its limitations are. It can get weird sometimes. (For example, it thinks Pinkie Pie is Irish for some reason.) Plus, it can be fun to mess around with it.
Like, SCP-682!Bot told me his name was Steve. You don't hear something like that every day.
Such are the joys of life.
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Commentary by
on 2023-01-05 01:03:39 UTC
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So not only does the Sue strut around sans clothing, she also can't be bothered to do basic research on realistic speeds for flight craft. That is concerning.
On the other hand… we got the Derik Singing Incident.
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Whoops, missed responding to this. by
on 2023-01-07 07:35:11 UTC
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What is this? A Neshomeh mission? Good golly gracious! by
on 2023-01-04 23:37:46 UTC
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Ah. So it’s Derik and Gall vs. Hulk-seducing Knockoff Catwoman (which is definitely her name). I absolutely loved that the song was “Down Under”.
—Ls, lovin’ it
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I still got it! ^_~ Thanks for reading. (nm) by
on 2023-01-04 23:54:06 UTC
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I've said it before... by
on 2023-01-04 23:19:54 UTC
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...I shall say it again: The fact that her name is Dr. Feline and that she is taken seriously by literally anyone is deeply upsetting to me. That she can turn into a cat and that her code name is "Kitty" makes me even more upset. It's so one-note, and the note is 'cat'.
Enjoyed the mission still! =D Especially Derik's singing. Inspired, even if he would disagree.
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=^.^= by
on 2023-01-04 23:43:48 UTC
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I'm now imagining that this is the photo in her dossier:
(Fun fact: a musician friend of mine uses one of these in some of her tracks, such as this demo. {X D)
~Neshomeh
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Obligatory Natsume Sōseki joke in 3… 2… by
on 2023-01-04 23:24:43 UTC
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I am a cat. As of yet I have an incredibly on-the-nose name.