Subject: I do get it!
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Posted on: 2023-07-17 12:05:18 UTC

May I say how I see the way you did it?

  • "job-box" - fab. Did Fix-It rig it up?
  • "did sit a bit fro" - "sat" is ok too. ^_~ I do not see "fro" in use if not "to and fro", but I do not see how to say it if not.
  • "a red bit" - is it not a red orb? Or a gem?
  • "as it did go on and off" - or "as it lit and got dim".
  • "wry" - I see it is how you use it; fab job!
  • I say the old saw is The God of the Os, but "Rex" is ok too.
  • "did tic" - can we say "had a tic"? (Not the bug one!)

"Old saw" is not too fab (yes, and I did say it ere you!). It is not bad in "the Way of the Old Saw", but can "the old saw of J.R.R." be his "fic"? And the old saw of Sir El of Cut-Pit can be his "lay"? (A bit as the lay J.R.R. did of a boy, a gal, and a dog; it was The Lay of Let Me Go, but as an elf may say it.) Or his "way"?

hS

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