Subject: Wow! You did go on and on (not in a bad way).
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Posted on: 2023-07-18 16:32:16 UTC

A lot of it is not how my pen has it, but it's ok - you are not me. But a bit or two, you pen in a big way but may use a wee way too.

“Add a go to the lot.” > "Got a new one," and "The kin of the Sue is...?" > "Who are her kin?", but the big one is by Jay:

"She did get a big ink-hue bow off her arm-top, and did try the gut" > "She got her big ink-hue bow off her arm to try the gut". Why use a run-on? Few "and" is not a bad way to pen it.

A lot of it is fab, too! "her yen for Acy not to be too mad. // Acy was mad." was a joy for me.

hS

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