Subject: more of the Raven Rose
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Posted on: 2008-07-03 01:47:00 UTC

thanks kawaiiichisgurl4eva for reviewign! everyone else should be like you! im glad you liked it

chapter 1

agent rebecca stepped thru the portal into rivendel (AN: is that how you spell it?) and looked around. the marysue was rite in front of her talking to legolas. rebecca lifted her sord. "princess sparkly your charged with being a marysue prepare to die!" She said.

but the marysue was to fast! she shot a bolt of litening at rebecca! rebecca dov to the ground! her sword fell from her hand to far away to reach!

suddenly the sue screamed! rebecca looked up and the sue was gone! legolas wanderd off confused. there in front of rebecca was a beautiful black Rose with gold trim on her petals and pale violet leaves. she shone in the evning sunlight.

"i am the Raven Rose" she said.

"b-but how did you do that?" rebecca asked "where did the sue go?"

"ill explain later" the Raven Rose said "take me to the so imediately"

AN: plz r + r! reviews are nice!

[[OOC: What's sad is that I used to write stories like this. Only with more apostrophes.]]

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