Subject: ur wrong izas evil an im n0t cowntin ur review so :ppppppppp (nm
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Posted on: 2008-07-03 02:01:00 UTC
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Hello again, chums! [[PPC Badfic Game 2008]] by
on 2008-07-01 10:32:00 UTC
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Author profile. by
on 2008-07-11 19:24:00 UTC
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Penname: Torian
Bio: So like I'm a slashe r and Ilike random ch aaracters that nobody bothe ers with mych so if th eres an bit chara you li ek and wa tn to seehookup wit h soemone just sned me a reviw on o ne of my s tories and reqest it. -
We made a joint account ... by
on 2008-07-08 00:18:00 UTC
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"untilted slashy thign w/foxxehs" by
on 2008-07-08 21:25:00 UTC
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Sorry I'm late - Account underneath. by
on 2008-07-07 03:29:00 UTC
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Name: origonalgangsta2008
Bio: Yo! My nam is Terrence, nd im gangsta. I sux at profiels, but heres go. Im 16 nd, if u can't alredy see, I like The Clover coz he's, like, totally badass if you can't see that u're stupdi. Jus so u know, I dont like mean peeps, and I will pop a cap in the asses of any1 who treis to be mean to any1. K?
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Ma 1st story, yeyah! by
on 2008-07-07 03:47:00 UTC
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Da Clover's Revenging Chapter 2 by
on 2008-07-09 23:33:00 UTC
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You are a complete imbocile. by
on 2008-07-10 00:32:00 UTC
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If there is one person on this abbysmal site who deserves flames, it's you.
I'm going to put this in very short, simple words, that even someone of your pea-sized intellect can understand:
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SCREW YOU, FLAMER! by
on 2008-07-10 03:22:00 UTC
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Why dos ma storie suk, huh? Why? Can u do betta? Weres ur storie huh? GO DI IN A DTCH, FLAMA YOU PRIK. U maek fun of my and my pepsp and u maek mistaeks!!! God, pissof, you imbecile (yea I checkd dictionary.com!)!!
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oo dats not fair da pooor floweres! by
on 2008-07-08 05:05:00 UTC
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how culd u do dis 2 DA CLOVR????
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[[OOC: I actually did some research beforehand...]] by
on 2008-07-07 03:32:00 UTC
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Some being looking at profiles of people with "gangsta" in their name. One made me laugh with his attempts at being "gangsta", so I've based it mostly off of him. There was something so inconsistent about his account...you can see it here - http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1222081/BURNER2-Gangsta_Gangsta-CL - and if anyone's involved in Code Lyoko fic, you might just wanna take a look. I have a feeling he ain't the greatest fic writer. :P
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on 2008-07-03 17:31:00 UTC
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Name: im_tehmarster
Profile: oh hi I'm not really the master but he is so prette!!1 so i stole his name, lol. NEway, i'll right someting sooon, teh pppc is grate, LOTR SUCKSSS!!!11!! -
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on 2008-07-02 22:55:00 UTC
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The Raven Rose by
on 2008-07-02 23:04:00 UTC
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more of the Raven Rose by
on 2008-07-03 01:47:00 UTC
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Review! by
on 2008-07-07 03:50:00 UTC
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Thats sum ciil stuff dere, homie. I wanna red mor.
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FLAMEORS!!!1 by
on 2008-07-03 17:33:00 UTC
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i dont like to flame but YOURE STORY SUCKSS11!! ROSES CANT BE BLCAK STUPID!!!1 AN LOTR IS STUPDI TO!!!!1
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FLAMERZ SUCK! by
on 2008-07-04 00:19:00 UTC
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AND SO DO U!!! LOTR DOS NOT SUCL, LORT IS AWSOME!!!! HOA DARE U SAY THAT!!! MEANIE!!!
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((If you can forgive me, I don't hate LotR, really)) (nm) by
on 2008-07-04 01:07:00 UTC
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[[OOC: If you'll forgive my atrocious punctuation... by
on 2008-07-04 03:28:00 UTC
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...I can forgive your blasphemous LOTR-bashing.]]
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I ONLE FLAME STUPID POEPLE LIEK YOU!!@!!@ by
on 2008-07-04 01:05:00 UTC
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ALL FANTASE IS DUM AND SULD BE BUNRED!!! AN I ONLY FLAM PEIPLE THAT DESERVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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OMG ur so meen! by
on 2008-07-04 12:09:00 UTC
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ur so nasite n i bet ur jst jelos!!!!
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ur stuped by
on 2008-07-03 17:35:00 UTC
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roeses can 2 be blake i no bcuz i seen it on ncis were gibs alwaiys gave abie blac roses wen seh did a gud job or neded chering up so tere ur stuped
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YOUR THE STUPDI ONE1111!!! by
on 2008-07-04 01:03:00 UTC
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ONLY FAEK ROSESES ARE BLACK THEIR ARE NO RAEL BLACK ROSES THEY HAVE NVER GROWN THEM YOU ARE THE STUBID ONE!!@!@!
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STOPID FLAMR URE A PRIK! by
on 2008-07-09 23:50:00 UTC
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Cant beleve pepl liek you can use compiters, ure obvidusl a grumpe old man or s pifg. ANd there is suci thingd as blak rosis, you dumares! STOP UR FLAMN!
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reviw by
on 2008-07-03 17:25:00 UTC
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omg taht was so awsum adn i luved hw teh ravin roes kiled taht marrysu ded and plz red and revie my ficcie cuz its awsum liek tihs
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Review!!!11 by
on 2008-07-03 10:22:00 UTC
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Teh raven rose is so prettyy~
ong whut happnd 2 teh sue????
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Reveiw by
on 2008-07-03 04:36:00 UTC
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Awww tihs was lovely i nevr knwe taht the SO had a gf! Pleas let them gete baack togerthe!
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Oopsie! by
on 2008-07-03 00:20:00 UTC
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Forgot these parts
Genre: romance
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wow by
on 2008-07-02 23:07:00 UTC
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taht was relly cole and wil raven roes and teh so get bake 2getha culd u plz updaet son bcuz i relly want 2 no and plz revue my awsum stroi abut cerrin trip and anseal cuz i want 2 no wahy evry1 tihnks abut tehir luv 4 eahc ohta liek i watn 2 no abut raven ros and teh so
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[[OOC: Does it hurt to type like that?]] (nm) by
on 2008-07-02 23:23:00 UTC
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[[OOC: Yes, it hurts a lot. I'm going to need more M&Ms]] (nm) by
on 2008-07-02 23:26:00 UTC
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[[OOC: How about some NM & NMs?]] by
on 2008-07-03 00:24:00 UTC
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[[Still OOC: I think I have some lying around somewhere.]]
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my aws0m3 pr0f1l3 lolz. by
on 2008-07-02 22:41:00 UTC
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TEH SECUND CAHPPIE1!!!11!!1112!1!!33@!! by
on 2008-07-03 16:08:00 UTC
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awsum by
on 2008-07-03 17:27:00 UTC
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i lieked it and taht evel bithc neded 2 dye
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[[OOC: Smites enter key. This is part of the above review]] by
on 2008-07-03 17:28:00 UTC
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but waht was wiht teh wirednes at teh end was it manks and sahdwo cuz tehy semed 2 be relly out of charter if u no waht i meen
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on 2008-07-03 04:33:00 UTC
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OMG i cant even reed taht ur writn is teh worts ive ever seen! u need a betta reader sseroiusly tehn mayb ill reed it adn give yuo a beter reveiw but rite now it sux!
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nooooo ur s0000 m3333333n!!1!11111@11!!!`~ by
on 2008-07-03 15:45:00 UTC
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i h8 u ur awlfu an u hav secs w/ ur kats so tehre!!1!!1!1111! it dusnt mater wat i tloks lyke sloong as u canr ead it rite/??/???!???!?1//111?!!
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Reply to nooooo ur s0000 m3333333n!!1!11111@11!!!`~ by
on 2008-07-03 20:41:00 UTC
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OMG u r seroisly in ned of an atitude chagnge i wuz only tryin 2 hepl and yuo give me all tihs greif! i dont even ahve cats i dont kep pets but i bet u do adn u do it wiht ur mum too!!!!!111 u ned to grow upa and r get a lief insteda of bein so ffin rude to ppl who r onnly tryin to help YUO!
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Revuw by
on 2008-07-02 23:04:00 UTC
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yays thus is relly gud and i tihkn u shuld rite more and plz revue my stroi its cerrin trip and ansela luv stroi and u can find it by luking and u shuld red it bcuz its relly gud liek urs is
[[I think everyone's brain is hurting. I'm going through packs of M&Ms like they're going out of fashion,and no I am not addicted to them thank you very much, not any more than any other kind of chocolate.
Ansela, who is going kind of insane and is getting ready to post a third 'chapter'.]] -
o rite ya im aspaz by
on 2008-07-02 22:49:00 UTC
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stori infeo!1!!
titl: uhn...kant tihnk o desen ttitle, wil pots l8r
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l0l ive wrtn a storiie! by
on 2008-07-02 11:04:00 UTC
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Oh, yes, of course I'm going to do exactly what you say. by
on 2008-07-02 23:56:00 UTC
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*eyeroll*
Honestly, what do you think this is, your personal playground for your sugar-driven talentless ravings? This is a site for FANfiction, fiction written by FANs of the PPC. To be a fan, you need a working brain, QED, you are distinctly underqualified. Moron.
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HEY FLAMA YOU A BRSTRD! by
on 2008-07-09 23:57:00 UTC
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Whydid yui say that its FANficshun wich mens FANS wret it nd any1 cn be a fFAN, not jst u and ure pig frends ho go roumnd opprdshin my peeps and bein racist and stuff. ND WERES UR STORY, HUH?
Ots god storie. Da agents coolm and Dumbledor dos suick, hes studip and oppresice and stuf..
[[OOC: Terribly, terribly sorry. I don't think you're racist or oppressive or a pig. This is what happens when young white children take rap too literally, heh.]] -
stop being mean! by
on 2008-07-03 00:29:00 UTC
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there not talentless its a good story! didnt anyone teach you not 2 be mean to people?
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[[OOC: Indeed. Very scary. My eyes hurt...]] (nm) by
on 2008-07-03 02:13:00 UTC
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kewl by
on 2008-07-02 23:10:00 UTC
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teh so is a meeny an he was rong and ur agnets r cole cuz i liek vamprires and culd u plz reveiw mai stroi plz evn tho it doesnt has vamprires in it bcuz it had a luv seen insted hehehe
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Reveiw by
on 2008-07-02 17:58:00 UTC
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I lyk tihs sotry but tehy wer a bit viloent andhurt poeple. Vampiers in the PPc dont hurt ppl form the canonworlds if tehy dont do bdad stuf liek bein marysyues.I tihnk u shuld make kaya mor like sellene or taht guy in flotrs whos gay (i thikn hiz name is archer adn hes reely smart).
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on 2008-07-02 11:12:00 UTC
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Mor vampiers in teh ppc !!11!!!
Pls write mor - ther shud be mor vampiers in teh ppc becos they ar so kewl (an so ar bishies - mayb u cud writ a vampier-bishie? *pupy-dog eys*)
pls pls writ mor
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on 2008-07-02 10:23:00 UTC
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Account Name: Blondeelfkitty
Profile: well i like teh ppc ans teh so is my fav!!!!!1!"! i like aal teh hawt guys in teh ppc 2!!!!!!!!!11!i'm riting my own agent 2 she is reely hwat as well!1!!1!!!!
L8Rs
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A Goth IN Teh PPc by
on 2008-07-03 10:11:00 UTC
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oh noooooOoooOOOOOoOoOO! by
on 2008-07-04 07:12:00 UTC
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anglka cant di dats jus so bad n men an u must sav herrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!
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kakoi by
on 2008-07-03 17:40:00 UTC
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taht was so kewl and i hop angleika can fidn sum1 woh undrestadns hre and can hepl her b a goht 4eva adn not b liek her meenie pratenr wo neds 2 serosly dye
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Account name: Hikau Yagami
Profile: HAAAAAII! im Hikau yagami n i luv deathnote! its teh best mang eva!!!111! n i luv L so stay awaii!! lol!1
im suck a gud wrytr n i luc teh ppc so i;l post storyies sooooon1111!
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Teh Tradgey of teh Sunflower!!! by
on 2008-07-02 10:29:00 UTC
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Teh Tradgey of teh Sunflower! 2~ by
on 2008-07-03 03:20:00 UTC
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[[OOC: What's a nsaite? by
on 2008-07-03 05:05:00 UTC
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I'm guessing "nasty," maybe?]]
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[[OOC: Exactly. by
on 2008-07-03 09:48:00 UTC
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Amazing what words you come up with when you try to spell them wrong.]]
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ooo dat is so SAD! what an eeeeevil pnishmet! by
on 2008-07-03 02:10:00 UTC
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no 1 desrves 2 b turned in2 a floower!
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OMG!!! by
on 2008-07-03 00:02:00 UTC
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OMG!!! I totally kne it! that xplains eveything lol!
Only Hiakry can't b the best agent in the PPC beause Jakacia is akready, so mebby u should fix that!
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Well, what do you know. by
on 2008-07-02 23:49:00 UTC
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One of you cretins actually got something right. The SO, as you have, I'll be generous, 'written' him, is indeed a Marty-Sam (it's not 'Garystu', moron, don't you know anything?). But that still doesn't make up for your sheer, bone-shattering ignorance in the matter of anything else.
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teh so is a garrystew!!!!1!! by
on 2008-07-02 23:14:00 UTC
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i alwaiys new teher was sumtihng difrent abut him adn hes muhc coler as a stu adn i bet it was 1 of teh ohter 'flours' taht mad him 1 bcuz tehy was jeloz of him and hickory shuld fre him form his cruse so they can b 2getha 4eva and plz revew mai stroi as wel bcuz its a romacne liek tihs but wiht agnets isnted of teh so and its relly cole juts liek tihs
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Review by
on 2008-07-02 23:07:00 UTC
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Thats stupid. he doesnt need to be a garystu to be awesome becaus hes already awesoem so there.
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[[OOC: Put in wrong name...review's from MoggetsGurl.]] (nm) by
on 2008-07-02 23:08:00 UTC
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on 2008-07-02 17:49:00 UTC
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OMG! Teh So was a garyStU? Tahst like zen or somehting. I dont no waht zen is but it soubnd kool adn my mum ssays it a lot.
But tehre cant be anotehr agetn whos the BESTEST cos Jaycacia is teh bestest! U culd say she waz beter tahn all the otehr agnets but noyt Jaycacia. -
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luv in hQ by
on 2008-07-02 04:35:00 UTC
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OMG CHAPPIE 2!!!!!11! by
on 2008-07-03 04:31:00 UTC
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Review!!!11 by
on 2008-07-02 10:14:00 UTC
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omg whuts gonna happn1/
im so gelous of krita, she getsta blow thingz uo!!!!
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Reveiw for Childhood Crush by
on 2008-07-02 05:53:00 UTC
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Oh noes waht is gonna happen to krista!????//!!1
I liek tihs story but u need to rite more! I wanna kno about waht happens!!1 Brenden is sooo kool he gest to blow stuf up and is not baad lookin iether! -
[[Ack...just "reveiw", not the other bit]] (nm) by
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A review in the 'name' of k0di369 by
on 2008-07-02 05:52:00 UTC
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wll afagndu u hav lyk an intrestin stori but i tink maby u shud hav krista an brendin know eachuzer 4 loger cuz a fren ov myn haz lyked dis boi 4 years an shi stil hasntt told im dat zhe lyks hm so in lyk 2 minuts is relly irrealistic but it luks intrestin lyk i sayd plz uppy-d8 s000n!!11!
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k0di369 teh 1337~!!11!!
[[OOC: I even managed to misspell the "author"'s name. This is a new low. I shall now contemplate it.]] -
[[OOC]] You can just put k0di369... by
on 2008-07-02 16:54:00 UTC
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... in the 'Author' box when posting a review, rather than your own name.
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The thing is... by
on 2008-07-02 20:04:00 UTC
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I don't type 'author' in manually, I just sign in. Therefore, this is easier, I think.
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Name: AgafndYou
Profile: OMG i LUUUUV teh PPC tehy r soooooooooo amzng an kool n stuf but i LUUUUUUUUV brenden OMG he is SOOOOOOOO cute!!!11!!11!
[[OOC: My brain hurts. Oh, well. At least my username's somewhat sane.]] -
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Story: The Love of Melba. by
on 2008-07-06 06:02:00 UTC
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[[OOC]]Oops! I think I posted two versions at once! by
on 2008-07-06 06:05:00 UTC
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Please use the latter one in the site.
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And forget the first one, there was an italics mistake. by
on 2008-07-06 06:06:00 UTC
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Sorry!
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Oops! I meant the second one! by
on 2008-07-06 13:50:00 UTC
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Sorry for adding to the confusion!
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Story: The Love of Melba. by
on 2008-07-06 06:01:00 UTC
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Story: Makes-Things is Back! by
on 2008-07-04 11:17:00 UTC
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Review!!1 by
on 2008-07-05 01:30:00 UTC
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ong mkethgs is bak?!?! dats so kool!!! but leik, teh othr stff was bormng! lol
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[[OOC]] Can you give me some brain food? by
on 2008-07-04 11:28:00 UTC
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My mind feels malnourished today.
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[[OOC]] And don't mention Korean Latin to me. ever. (nm) by
on 2008-07-04 11:41:00 UTC
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Should U, Wuld U, Kudzu B Mine? by
on 2008-07-02 02:10:00 UTC
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Chapter Two! by
on 2008-07-02 23:48:00 UTC
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tahts so kelw by
on 2008-07-03 00:39:00 UTC
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and im sory i didnt reviw lats chappie i muts hav mist it in teh lits cuz i wuld has othawes and auror (is dat how u spel it) shuld totly b in dpartmetn off pursenel bcuz seh neds 2 b wiht teh markis and plz revew my ficcie bcuz its awsum
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Oh hey this is really goof! by
on 2008-07-03 00:23:00 UTC
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Is seh goin to join the mArkeys department (I thikn its called the depratment of personal or somthing) becos thet would be realy cool. also ive herd peopl say yo should have a betta for yor wrightin, do you hav a betta? I dont know what one is but appartmently all good authers hav one.
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oooh da markies is sooo sadd! by
on 2008-07-03 02:07:00 UTC
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!
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on 2008-07-02 07:54:00 UTC
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Oooo tihs is intruiging who is she? hse sounds reely prtty but u need 2 be carful or she mite end up a mArySue adn tehn some1 wud hav to kill her adn i dont want tath cuz I wann kno waht happens to her!
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True Luve Needs No One ELse by
on 2008-07-02 02:29:00 UTC
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This awesom. by
on 2008-07-09 23:47:00 UTC
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Da flowrs ar evil ashell specially SO, bot so much Da Clover and Hycinth hehehh. Wrte more plz!!!!!1!
[[OOC: A feminist slasher with no comprehension of what "nearly dead" means.
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sugoi dattebayo by
on 2008-07-03 17:38:00 UTC
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izza was relly meen and its gud taht shes gon and now sedir can b wiht her tru luv 4eva and eva evan tho teh flours r meenies and watn to splet tehm up
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on 2008-07-02 07:52:00 UTC
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OMG taht was soo meen izas not like taht! oK she iz a bit wierd cuz shes form bad slash but she is not mean and crul! u need to get ur facts straiht bef4 u rite stuf ike tihs!
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ur wrong izas evil an im n0t cowntin ur review so :ppppppppp (nm by
on 2008-07-03 02:01:00 UTC
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Yay! by
on 2008-07-02 02:36:00 UTC
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Yay! I rlly like ur storu, even tho I thin gay is ok lol! But no1 shulb b mean lik Iza 2 zedri, so I likked this! R U going 2 wirte mor, or is this a 1-shiot? Id lik 2 c mor detail bwtwwn Sedrio and Jonatham if u contienu, ok?
O and u can cuont this revue as 10 if you want 2!! lol
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[[OOC: *snort* I like that - "1-shiot" - very nice 'slip'!]] (nm by
on 2008-07-02 04:59:00 UTC
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(( The sad thing... )) by
on 2008-07-02 23:58:00 UTC
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(( The sad thing is that most of the slips really are slips. My recipe for badfic writing is three parts uncorrected typing to one part word replacement with optional grammar on the side. ^_^;
See, Brandy as a character isn't dumb, really. She's lazy and she has a tendency to miss the forest for the trees when it comes to canon, but she COULD improve. She just doesn't want to spend any real time on it.
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[[OOC: Indeed; I wasn't sure if it was intentional, but by
on 2008-07-03 02:00:00 UTC
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it was very funny. Unfortunately, my recipe for badfic writing is more along the lines of "force yourself not to backspace every time there's an error", with forced mistakes making up about four out of five parts. *sigh*]]
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[[OOC: My recipe... by
on 2008-07-03 04:36:00 UTC
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Is to forget that the shift and apostrophe keys exist, and remember how I wrote when I was twelve. (I wrote some really bad stuff when I was twelve, although with better grammar than MoggetsGurl.)]]
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[[OOC: I just type really, really, really slowly. by
on 2008-07-03 15:51:00 UTC
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And I have to think about each typo. The problem is, I'm so obsessed with grammar this thing is making me infuriated. I don't know if I can post another chapter. o.o *shivering from lack of breakfast*]]
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[[OOC: Ansela's recipe is to by
on 2008-07-03 17:31:00 UTC
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type really slowly and carefully, making sure that she deliberately leaves mistakes that she wouldn't otherwise make. She also has to force herself to leave her usual typos in place and to forget the existence of capital letters and proper punctuation. She has also slipped back into third person in self-defence, as she is horrifying herself with her 'writing'.]]
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Something diffferent. by
on 2008-07-02 00:21:00 UTC
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Subatomic Love
PPC Wiki fanfic. Can two hard-working electrons find time for a love-life?
Category: Wiki Projects - Fiction Rated: R - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 551 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 02-07-08 - Published: 02-07-08 -
Subatomic Love, chapter 2. Now complete. by
on 2008-07-04 02:12:00 UTC
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Chapter Two
Reveiws please!
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[[OOC: I don't want to review this IC... by
on 2008-07-05 01:27:00 UTC
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Because I don't think MoggetsGurl can would willingly click on anything with the word "Subatomic" in it. But, as Tomato, I just wanted to say that this was perhaps the strangest and most intriguing thing I have ever read.]]
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OMG I LOVED IT!!!@ by
on 2008-07-04 01:37:00 UTC
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IT WAS SO GRATE AND FUNNY I WOOD NEVR HOAVE THOUT OF MAKING ELETCORNS FALL IN LOVE BUT YOU DID ID SOO WEL!!!1!!!
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Reveiw by
on 2008-07-02 07:48:00 UTC
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That was a bit wierd how can elecrtons have love lifes? they dont even tihnk they r just little bits of atomms.
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review for 'Subatomic Love,' in the 'name' of k0di369 by
on 2008-07-02 06:17:00 UTC
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sugoii desu by
on 2008-07-02 00:30:00 UTC
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that was liek so kawaii and squee. i didnt undrestadn al teh tecnicall wrods or anetihng butt woh culd sicne sceince is so difucult
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cerrin trip and anselas luv stroi by
on 2008-07-01 18:29:00 UTC
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Review by
on 2008-07-02 23:10:00 UTC
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omg that was really good! whats gonna happen! update plz!
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cerrin trip and anselas luv stroi chappie 2 by
on 2008-07-02 01:05:00 UTC
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cerrin trip and anselas luv stroi chappie 3 (NWS, NBS) by
on 2008-07-03 17:50:00 UTC
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O hei! by
on 2008-07-03 01:04:00 UTC
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Review by
on 2008-07-02 23:13:00 UTC
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I didnt see there was another chappie now i feel stupid. can my other review count as 1 of the 5 so youll get 5 faster?
omg not another cliffie! stop it! i wanna know what happens! -
Reviwe time!!! by
on 2008-07-02 10:35:00 UTC
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OMG u cant leav it dere! i need ta now what happend!
ansela sould so sel da picz!!! -
Reveiw by
on 2008-07-01 20:37:00 UTC
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Taht twas reealy wow! I fell sorry for Cerin sheb ovbiousaly lovved trip lots and thenhaving tho find hi m cheeting on her would have bee juts awful, i duno wht id do if taht heppened to me.
I tihnk the wepons place is the armoury (dont no if tha's spelled rihgt). nad lux is crepy i hope i neve rmeet her.
Iduno what thos wierdwords liek sugoi ar tho, ar they Japanes? Waht do they mean? they soubd kool tho. -
Just... stop. by
on 2008-07-01 20:01:00 UTC
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Seriously. Just do everyone a favour and stop writing. Your plot sucks, your spelling sucks, your name sucks, and you suck. iF you don't stop writing I'll send my army of minions around to your house, so be warned and STOP.
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Re: Just... stop. by
on 2008-07-01 21:48:00 UTC
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your mean! its fanFICTIN, she can do whatever she want's....... Anyway, youre just jelous because you cant right and u live in ur parents basement!!! An dont have any friends!!!!!
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Reply to review by
on 2008-07-01 20:45:00 UTC
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omg u suck flamer ur not even brave enuf 2 use ur on nme
we will crush ur minions with a TANK! a tank made of JUSTICE AND REVENGE AGAINST YOUR ABUSE!!!
anyway u suk 2 i bet ur just jelus!!1 -
Review Reply by
on 2008-07-01 20:19:00 UTC
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wah, ur juts a meenie who does't aprecate mai sugoi writig skilz. im not scarred off ur minons. brign em one!!!1!!
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[[OOC: *dies and is dead* You evil person, lol.]] by
on 2008-07-01 19:38:00 UTC
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Omg I luff it! it's so dramatic and I really want to now what happens next! Write mor now!!!!
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omg, i cant belive i forget this by
on 2008-07-01 19:10:00 UTC
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[[OOC: This is the info for the fic above]]
Title: cerrin trip and anselas luv stroi
Genre : Romance
Summary: cerrins in luv wiht trip but seh catces trip wiht ansela waht wil hapen
[[Gah, I blame the badness. Excuse me while I go drown myself in bleepka and chocolate while working on the next installment.]] -
Song of the Vampire by
on 2008-07-01 15:28:00 UTC
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ooo thats cool there shuld be more vampries in da ppc! (nm) by
on 2008-07-02 01:17:00 UTC
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What are you, an idiot? by
on 2008-07-01 22:40:00 UTC
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PPC vampires are not the same as some silly teen novel's vampires, moron. I don't know what you thought you were doing, but it made you look really stupid. You can't even spell. I don't know why people like you are allowed to live.
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Stop being meen! by
on 2008-07-02 03:51:00 UTC
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Ur just jealous coz shes shuch a good riter, leeve her alone! So wat if PPC vamps r differen? HELLO! It's fanFICTION, stupid!
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ur so mean! by
on 2008-07-01 23:11:00 UTC
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ong you shuld shtu up!1!
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Re: Song of the Vampire by
on 2008-07-01 21:43:00 UTC
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OMFG! Thats soooo cool! Is she gonna date legoals? pleeeeeze............. XD XD XD
She could still hear the music in her mind, though, and that encouraged her and kept her going.
thats', like, so deep.
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kawaii sprakles by
on 2008-07-01 17:52:00 UTC
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this stroie is so kawaii and sugoi and the bonsy malorn is so hidoi for not leting selene has a nu patrner and maling hre go on misions al alon. i luv teh sprakles. plz writ moar
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omg i luvd it by
on 2008-07-01 16:37:00 UTC
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its sooo deep n teh song is awsum n vampires r awsum 2! ur similys r rely professional n stuff!
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Reveiw by
on 2008-07-01 15:51:00 UTC
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Awww... I was soo sad when I herd Daffydd was dead. and i wonder how his gf fellt? but yeah everyo1 tihnks Selenes all tuff and doesnt need any1 but she would ahve felt sad to. and the bonsay malorn is juts meen making her go on misions al alone! Im glad she felt beter at the end!
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Interesting. by
on 2008-07-01 15:38:00 UTC
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Very pretty Song, though it is not so Tragic as it could be if Sunlight cannot harm her. She does sound Beautiful, though.
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[[please read that last as by XxLuminescent-TearsxX]] by
on 2008-07-01 15:39:00 UTC
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((Cannot keep own pseudogoth username straight...))
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Oh gods. by
on 2008-07-01 15:22:00 UTC
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I dunno its kinda poring... by
on 2008-07-04 01:24:00 UTC
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its just descirptoin altho its very prety, right mores o sothing happesn plese
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oh taht ix AWRASOME DUde porst mre son! (PMS lol) by
on 2008-07-02 22:46:00 UTC
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i luv hjow deep i tis. meybe ill try somtime..i meen deepe stuf lol dariikan mite b agnsti to smetyme
elerianelel iz kewl1!1@! posr mre!!1!1! -
Vampiers in the PPC! by
on 2008-07-02 10:35:00 UTC
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OMFG taht is such a kewl stroy and i luv ur writng stile - its sooooo gothik 1!!!!1!
ellreniael neds to fin a hawt vampier bishie (or a hawt vampier chick lol)i feel so sory forher cos she is so alon :( -
ooomg that is SO deep! by
on 2008-07-02 01:16:00 UTC
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i just wanna hug her and give er choclates and make it all beter and you amde me CRY!!@!!!
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omg luv it by
on 2008-07-01 17:55:00 UTC
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u shuld write moar abut eleranial (is tat how u spel it0 bcuz shes kawaii and neds a bishie bf vampire to kep her conpanie
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wow i luvd it by
on 2008-07-01 16:45:00 UTC
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there needs 2 b mor vampyrs in the ppc lol my stories gna be abt vampyrs
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Review by
on 2008-07-01 15:46:00 UTC
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OMG that was like sooo deep. Ellerianniel needs to fidn reel love and I hop she does cos that is soooo sad waht shes been throgh!
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Under attack‼!11! by
on 2008-07-01 15:15:00 UTC
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Chapter 2! by
on 2008-07-02 04:07:00 UTC
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Chapter 3£! by
on 2008-07-03 21:23:00 UTC
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YAY!! by
on 2008-07-04 01:18:00 UTC
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thiis is a goood story im stoo hjappy theres a few good righters here an you are one of themm!!1! I
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omg thier gong 2 figth tehh marrysus!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!! by
on 2008-07-03 00:36:00 UTC
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tahts so cole and i now taht mel and makstihngs wil kil moar sues tahn anie otha agnet acept jacasia bcuz tehyr awsum liek tahe and plz writ moar bcuz i watn 2 red it and plz reviw my ficcie bcuz its awsum and kewl liek tihs 1
[[OOC: Ansela is scaring herself now. She is finding it easier and easier to write in the above manner with each in character review that she writes. She is also wondering why she is talking about herself in the third person]] -
coooliees! by
on 2008-07-03 01:57:00 UTC
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fightin an killin and mel kikcs @$$$$$$$!!!!!!!
[[OOC: Sedri is also scaring herself, and understands Ansela's need to write in third person as Sedri believes it is a form of protection for the abused, grammer-loving brains of all involved Borders.]] -
Yay! by
on 2008-07-03 00:13:00 UTC
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Oooh, I guessed it, go me! lol I'm glad makes0things finds som lov, ppl are so mane 2 him
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on 2008-07-02 01:53:00 UTC
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OMG u ROCL 4 wirting this story!!! I waz so mad hwne makes0things died, I almost cried! Do I c romace in the future? lol WRite more soon!
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YOU SAFED HIM! *huggleshugglesyayasqueee!* by
on 2008-07-02 01:13:00 UTC
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you safed him you safed him YAAAAAY!!!!
but you cant end it there i needt o know more what will happen noooooooooooow???? -
[[Oops, forgot...] by
on 2008-07-01 20:58:00 UTC
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iie u cant do taht by
on 2008-07-01 18:00:00 UTC
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u cant make it a clifhanger how culd u i want to fidn out waht hapens to makes tihngs and mel and thier sugoi luv 4 eahc otha
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ZOMG Cliffhanger!!!!11!!! by
on 2008-07-01 15:37:00 UTC
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OMG, that's sooo good! I cant wate to find out wat hapens! Mel sounds so cool an im so glad she saved Make Things!
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My profile by
on 2008-07-01 13:50:00 UTC
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hi i'm kawaiiichisgurl4eva. god 2 c u al
omg tihs palce is so sugoii. i can't wiat to writ sum god ficcies abut my fave ppc agnets ansela and trip. im a gud writr relly, just i has sum truble wit speling, which isnt relly as improtant as sum ppl sez it iz.
r&r my sugoii stroies and ill do the same to u for deffs. -
[[OOC]] A few questions? by
on 2008-07-01 13:54:00 UTC
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1.) Are we allowed to use other Boarder's Agents if we ask them for permission?
2) How explicit are we allowed to go? I'm thinking of using phrases worthy of Weeping Cock, but I remember that there are 13 year olds populating the boards who might not appreciate it. -
[[OOC]] Nitpickyness by
on 2008-07-02 05:59:00 UTC
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[[OOC]] A few answers. by
on 2008-07-01 14:19:00 UTC
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I get to write again! Hee! by
on 2008-07-01 13:49:00 UTC
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Reviwe time!!! by
on 2008-07-02 10:32:00 UTC
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OMG tht wax soooo men of JF n KT to do tht! but dis storie was sooo kawaiiii!1 (hee! I leik that word!)
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zomg! by
on 2008-07-01 23:10:00 UTC
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itz so toucin i lorved it!!!1!!
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aw, kawaii by
on 2008-07-01 18:04:00 UTC
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it was so meen of thoes nursry ppl 2 ignoer jasin liek taht and its good taht gorgia is wiht him noa. july falme and kumiro r juts jeloz bcuz no oen luvs tehm like jasin luvs gorgie
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OH poor Jasen! by
on 2008-07-01 14:27:00 UTC
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Its not fair how nobody likes him and I kno what that's like. Ar you going to wright more about tehm?
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Heehee! Well... by
on 2008-07-01 14:52:00 UTC
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Welll that ending wass bery sad so i was thikning mayb georgia and Jason could sneak away from Med 2gether and... Well I don't want 2 spiol u! LOL!
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Reveiw for Childhood Crush by
on 2008-07-01 14:13:00 UTC
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Aww, this wa a nice stroy andi felt soo soory for Jason, just cos he was differnet all the other kids liekd him. Im gladm Georgia could se him and was nice to him.
I don't like the eedning very mich though it made me sad. whay would tthos eother ppl be so meen to them?
Other than that nit was a great stroy and you shuld deffo rite more soon!!1! -
I love this place. by
on 2008-07-01 13:19:00 UTC
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I'm xXxkawaiifaerieneko19xXx!! I'll write as much badfic as I can.
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My profile!!! by
on 2008-07-01 13:16:00 UTC
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My Agent! by
on 2008-07-02 00:16:00 UTC
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so lyike I wnet out and made a doll of Aurora 4 my profile lol! Sorry to bother u. Ill write sumthing soon, primsie!!
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And the enthusiast strikes again... by
on 2008-07-01 11:31:00 UTC
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[[OOC: It's fine]] by
on 2008-07-01 11:37:00 UTC
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Considering gutsygem's profile looks like <a href="http://www.freewebs.com/fanficland/Author13.htm">this (with, as I recall, deliberately messed-up HTML), I don't think anyone's going to format anything I can't manage... welcome to the site.
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A Sunflower's Tears, chapter 4. by
on 2008-07-01 11:05:00 UTC
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A Sunflower's Tears, chapter5. by
on 2008-07-03 01:00:00 UTC
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Chapter 6 AND ITS DONN!!! by
on 2008-07-04 17:35:00 UTC
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Yaaaay! by
on 2008-07-05 16:40:00 UTC
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U finished it!!!! U r so awsome! I hpe my stroy iz half asgod as this1 when Im done llol! U shuld write 4 the ral PPC.
XOXOX
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yay tahst awsum by
on 2008-07-03 17:34:00 UTC
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teh evil acasia wil nevre trumph ova teh powre off jacasia and jaycasia wil defet teh bithc and safe teh so form her and waht was wiht taht bite at teh edn bcuz jay and acasia semed relly ot off chacter tere adn it where wired evan 4 teh ppc
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Reveiw by
on 2008-07-03 04:41:00 UTC
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Wow Jaycacia is sooo togh i thot she was dead! U should kill Acaica rite now!
Adn wy is tehre al taht wierd stuf at teh edn wiht Jay adn Acaica they arnet in cahracter tehre? -
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on 2008-07-03 16:59:00 UTC
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Thankx for revuwing! And i dont' kno whats up wit all that stugg at the edn! I didn wright it! I tHink fanficland iz sneeking it in tehre or somthing.
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Squee! by
on 2008-07-02 02:26:00 UTC
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OOOOh, I have;t repilied 2 1 of ur stories in a long time lol! This is still rlly rlly good, us hould finish it! Dud I ever tell u that Jaycasia is awsum, bcuz she IS! And don't kill theSO!!!! that would SUCK! Evn if he IS meen sumtimz!
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Oooo no fair that EVIl acacia !!!! by
on 2008-07-02 01:09:00 UTC
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tat pink and pruple glow is SO cool!
(- Sedri, who finds herself taking four times longer to type WITH errors than without them... *wince*) -
[[OOC: I know what you mean.]] (nm) by
on 2008-07-02 01:20:00 UTC
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[[OOC: Indeed. It's hard to be consistantly bad.]] (nm) by
on 2008-07-02 01:40:00 UTC
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[[OOC: same here.]] by
on 2008-07-02 22:53:00 UTC
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[[I kept on spelling words correctly and pretty much had to kill my brain a few times to make it all work.]]
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yays by
on 2008-07-01 13:58:00 UTC
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tihs is so awsum. plz writ mor. acasia (is that how u spel it9 neds to die so bad. kik her but jaycasia!!!!!!!!!!1elevntyone!
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That was awwesome. by
on 2008-07-01 12:58:00 UTC
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You write aa lot of good stuf for the PPC, I read siome of your other work. I think ytour Jaycacia serie s is the best of what you'v written. Shes realy pretty and talentd nad stuff and Acaica is just eeeeeeeeeevil!!11! I thouht she wasnt't verery nice back on the originnal series either cos she was scarin MakesThings and stuff.
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Re: A Sunflower's Tears, chapter 4 by
on 2008-07-01 12:22:00 UTC
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omg taht was so deep n stuf. i think jaycacia is a bit preppy (lol!) but aprt frm taht it waz relly gd
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Yay! I've always wanted to do this! by
on 2008-07-01 10:56:00 UTC
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[[OOC: That's absolutely fine. Posting it now]] (nm) by
on 2008-07-01 11:06:00 UTC
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[[OOC additional note]] by
on 2008-07-01 10:42:00 UTC
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Knew I'd forget something. If any of you who were in the last two games want to edit your profiles for this one, just follow the same proceedure as for making a new one, with maybe an OOC note that it's an edit, and all will be shiny.
hS, editing his own right now