Subject: I shall stay on the lookout, then.
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Posted on: 2014-02-22 16:39:00 UTC

I love Wobbles and the Notary (moreso the Notary because all the Time Lords seem to have varying shades of dislike towards her (except the Agent, he just ignores her) and it's interesting to see why. Sometimes it reads off as bullying, and then I remember that the Notary is a bit of a snob and a huge bureaucrat, and I laugh a little. Though she should get that photocopier fixed. ;)

Thank you so much! I feel like I've finally found the Holy Grail of characterisation. I'm glad their dynamic came off well to you; developing them has been about a seven-year project now and I'm glad to see it's paid off. I'll see if I can take a look at Worm.

I sent a PM to the author with my concerns about her story, and she... kinda backhandedly dismissed them. With some explanations as to how charge x and charge y should be justified (apparently Seraphina knows 96% of the Federation languages because languages come easily to her and she has an eidetic memory. Ah, really? I remember things fairly well and I take linguistics; does that make me fluent in Swahili, Zulu, Turkish, Cree, Chickasaw, Hungarian, Swedish, and Nauhatl? I don't think so. I can only make a limited amount of prepositional phrases in Turkish and some simple sentences in Zulu, but that doesn't make me fluent -- okay, I'll stop ranting). As you can see, I don't really buy those explanations.

I've got some Circle missions lined up, don't fret. Admittedly timelines may need to be adjusted to put them in because I started writing them before this one, but we'll see where the editing takes us.

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