Subject: Conclusions (Phobos? Herr Wozzeck? Comments?)
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Posted on: 2013-11-27 11:15:00 UTC

The mad comment-fest makes it clear that there are definitely a whole heap of things to comment on. However, yes, a lot of them are to do with the plagiarism - either that something /is/ plagiarised, or that it's been badly done so.

That said, there are a bunch of things that aren't (directly) related to the plagiarism - like the fact that they're unable to keep track of whether they're in a tent, or the incredibly creepy serial-Sue-killer (thanks, Dawn) vibes they keep giving off.

I think there's enough there to make a mission. Specifically, I think a mission in which the agents blame the characters for things that are more accurately the authors' fault. Yes, that's sort of what the PPC does anyway (since Mary-Sues aren't prone to describing themselves out loud, for instance), but I suggest something a bit more so:

Treat Jason, Emma, and Harriet as the psychopaths they are. We've said a few times in the comments that they seem to basically be doing this for kicks - so take that premise. Entirely for their own sick entertainment, these three have turned themselves into parodies of PPC and ACMESES agents, written themselves a Suefic (partially based on 'Rambling Band', because they're a highly unoriginal lot), and gone into it. They're reusing jokes and actions from RB because they enjoyed reading the report (how they got it from HQ's network, I don't know) - so it's basically the same as agents repeating lines from Monty Python. Except that this lot are twisted sadists while doing so.

If JEH were obviously self-inserts, I'd be uncomfortable with this suggestion. But they're not. They're mashup plagiarism. So I don't see any problem with seconding someone to the Department of Plagiarism and sending them to deal with JEH as plagiarists. The way to avoid accidentally flaming Aelin and Addie is... not to acknowledge they exist.

At least, that's what I think. But I'd like to hear comments from the people who (quite rightly) pointed out that it might be a bad idea.

hS

PS: Note that I'm not actually claiming the right to do this mission. I might do so, but I'm pretty sure other people (Dawn?) mentioned it first, so priority goes to them. ~hS

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