Subject: Re: Dragons
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Posted on: 2015-06-16 11:58:00 UTC

I'm afraid I might have slipped up in that regard (along with the golem's speech which is suppose to capital first letter at the start of each word).

Not sure if I can correct Alfie's appearance now... I could state later in the story that it is more of a subterranean lizard than a dragon which can make a chemical reaction in its mouth that's similar to breathing fire but more like a brief few sounds of fire that one would think it was a firecracker.

It would get rid of the dragon issue but create a new problem as well I guess.

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