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Extremely NSFW/NSFB

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3128163/1/TheSmileWhenYouToreMeApart

(Sorry about the ugly link, my keyboard is a bit broken.)

'Jonas is tortured by the two people he loves most but why don't they remember? How can he put the past behind him when he's forced to confront it every day? Warnings inside.'

The only possible good thing that can be said about this fic is that it is short. It packs quite a punch for its length though.

I'll officially ask for Permission in a couple days when I'm freed up from work obligations >> But here's the link to the fics for your evaluations:

<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6192696/3/LookoutSunyshoreCityHerecomesKariJones">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6192696/3/LookoutSunyshoreCityHerecomesKariJones
This one is the Vaporeon-with-Hydro-Cannon girl. (That just REALLY irks me since it's not hard to look up the move and see that it's limited to the Water starters. It also goes against -all- competitive battling logic but that's not the point...) It's currently undergoing a rewrite, but I looked at the scene and that bit hasn't changed. Not to mention she managed to get Flint's Infernape's moveset wrong, and has -no- concept of how an Elite Four member would battle.

<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5412290/1/TheDaysatSinnohAcademy">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5412290/1/TheDaysatSinnoh_Academy
This is the cold-but-beautiful one, and she's gotten a few things wrong. 1) Byron is not OOTP; 2) Crasher Wake should NOT be in school with Volkner and Candice at the same time; 3) Roark is NOT a coward; 4) Mysterious "Iris" pulling out a sword for NO BLOODY REASON; 5) It's just like every other Pokemon high school story; 6) She uses EMOTES in her SENTENCES. *Facepalm*

It was reasonable up till the point when I read about the girl being 15 and a "retired" Champion, as well as having a Vaporeon which knew Hydro Cannon (a move limited to Water type starters) and an Eevee which could beat an Elite Four's Rapidash with Dig and Shadow Ball (the rest of the team was Espeon, Beautifly, Gardevoir and Ninetales-- two Psychics, a Bug, Water, Fire and Normal doth NOT a balanced team make). That induced the spit take. That was one, and the other one which I noted was from a different fic and the traditional "cold and mysterious beauty" sort.

My Agent Cassie is Chinese, somewhat pyromaniacal and a little sadistic, has a fondness for most animals (except bees and Pug dogs), knows way too much about biology and the British legal system, collects panpipes and random shiny objects, registered Lust Objects so far Aragorn and Hitsugaya Toushirou... and has a mild fear of large crowds.

on many things. And while I thank you for your contribution, I think that by asking before actually doing something offensive, I demonstrated enough maturity to deserve a little better than browbeating and threatening ;-)

But you seriously can't expect people to scroll through I don't know how many pages of this board to maybe find an answer they want. I was trying to find it, honestly. I didn't. I asked. Thank you for answering.

Is a compromise possible? A rubin vase sort of image made with lightning bolts?

is always a bit painful.

In a fandom that has that, definitely make a mention of the location of Czech Republic on a mission. Something along the lines of: yeah, we're seaside, but we only have two large beaches. One of them we call Poland.

the demonic priestess is me. I just forgot to fill in my name. Heh.

I knew this would happen, I just knew it!

Ah well, here goes... *demonic priestess mode on*

Simple mortal, heed my words! Bethink thee, and renounce thy foolhardy endeavor! For there are things in the ultimate blackness of the gulfs of space, that e'en the Great Old Ones would shrink from touching! Believest thou truly that thy pathetic organic mind can bear the burden of such horrors? In other words, sweet'ms, ya really DON'T wanna see this here thingy.

three each, but that they came in perfectly alternated.

Unless the user who wanted to change the minis wants to get in trouble, then they don't attempt to do that change: Just leave those minis the way they are.

It just seems so appropriate.

If a mini type has been established in an OFU or a mission, it is what it is.

This has been stated elsewhere in the thread, but I wanted to make sure you all see it. Questions are good; paying attention when they're answered is better. So, is it clear now?

~Neshomeh

...because it was my idea and I'm awful like that. :)

It would be a good idea if you post a link to that fanfic, so that people may help you with that bad OC, and maybe show us what the OC is like so that you may get more to agree with you about killing it.

I don't know whenever you are allowed to change the minis or not, though. Are you sure that you will risk getting in trouble if you really want to change the minis? Just don't want anybody to get in trouble.

I've heard about the arresting thing also.

Yeah, I think that it should be legendary, or at least a very horrible and horrifying badfic. I, in order to spare everybody from a fic like this, would really like to ppc it if I am ever allowed to, but even then, with my parents the way they are about the email thing, I don't know how I can.

As far as I know, once a mini has been set, it cannot be changed, and the first person to write a mission in that continuum is the one to set it.

I would still charge a Sue with being insubordinate, because even though Jack, in particular, gets away with insubordination, the rest of the personnel on the base does not. Daniel is mouthy all the time, but he is not military. Carter is not nearly as mouthy as Jack to higher ranks. I would consider a Sue getting away with it as an indicator of sheshulness.

The writer actually got arrested over it, though he was acquitted once it was proven that he'd taken reasonable precautions to stop Girls Aloud or their fans finding it by accident. If that doesn't make Legendary, I don't know what does.