Now I'm sure everyone is thinking 'Who the heck is this guy again?'- but I haven't just upped and disappeared. It's taken a long-long time since getting Permission, but I have FINALLY completed my first mission.
That said, I need somebody with a fairly good knowledge of the Metal Gear series (specifically the more recent games) to take a look over it and check everything is alright. As well as that, seenas this is my first outing, hopefully somebody who could set me straight on anything I've got wrong procedurally as well.
Let me know if you can help here, and we can go from there.
Many thanks!
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Need a beta! by
on 2009-06-05 22:35:00 UTC
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*squee* I adoresh Tolkien poetry. by
on 2009-06-05 19:31:00 UTC
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Especially that verse.
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Tall ships and tall kings / Three times three by
on 2009-06-05 17:56:00 UTC
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What brought they from the foundered land
Over the flowing sea?
Seven stars and seven stones
And one white tree.
~Neshomeh, who's been trying to remember that for ages.
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Maudlin Hart (nm) by
on 2009-06-05 13:06:00 UTC
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Hurrah for giant bunny rabbits! by
on 2009-06-05 12:57:00 UTC
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Re: Jadis in a block of ice! by
on 2009-06-05 12:08:00 UTC
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*blink*
That looks suspiciously like we've found ourselves a handy source for any Latin issues. Bonus!
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Second poke! by
on 2009-06-05 10:55:00 UTC
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And welcome a'Board. How was the rest of your trip? And what on earth possessed you to listen to her and come over here? You realise there's no escape for you now, right?
hS
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Well... by
on 2009-06-05 10:50:00 UTC
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... I was tryingto send solid objects through the internet, and then there was the incident with the aquarium and three tonnes of iodine, and now I have shorter hair!
As to the rabbits... your guess is as good as mine.
hS
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Welcome. Here's a tall ship. (nm) by
on 2009-06-05 08:00:00 UTC
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Issue Three, now on your local newsstand! by
on 2009-06-05 07:17:00 UTC
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http://warrior-joe.livejournal.com/4372.html - Part One
http://warrior-joe.livejournal.com/4779.html - Part Two
In which advice is given, canons are slain, and the target goes on and on and on...
If there are any other Avatar: The Last Airbender fans on here, I'd love to know you exist. So I feel less alone.
Many thanks to Kgarrett for all the support, Cassie for being awesome even in crisis, and to Trojanhorse for being a hell of a beta.
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*prods Trojie onto Gtalk* (nm) by
on 2009-06-05 06:22:00 UTC
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*facepalm* by
on 2009-06-05 06:14:00 UTC
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A comma splice is the act of using a comma to string together clauses which really ought to be separated by a period. In this case, what I should have written was "Hi, I'm Gryphongirl. Neshomeh dragged me into this, so it's all her fault."
Note the period in the middle of the line, creating two sentences where there once was one comma splice.
Feah not, young grasshoppah. You will learn. {= )
~Neshomeh
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*claims as own* by
on 2009-06-05 06:09:00 UTC
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Mine now.
*drags away to feed chocolates to, away from everyone else*
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Comma splice? by
on 2009-06-05 06:04:00 UTC
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What's a comma splice? And I copied and pasted that directly, so there! :P Huzzoo for madness!
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Yay! Also, first poke! by
on 2009-06-05 06:00:00 UTC
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*poke*
I think I suggested something to the effect of that, not to quote me directly. If I had wanted that, I wouldn't have left that comma splice in there. {; p
Oh well. Welcome to the madhouse!
~Neshomeh
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Newbie baby confusion... by
on 2009-06-05 05:56:00 UTC
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So, I think this works... typing and all.
"Hi, I'm Gryphongirl, Neshomeh dragged me into this, so it's all her fault."
I believe this is what I'm supposed to say, yesno?
Much love to all PPCers
~Gryphongirl