Subject: (( That's... huh. ))
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Posted on: 2014-09-25 17:57:00 UTC

You know, I'm having a hard time coming up with in-character badficcer reviews of this because it's just a few shakes shy of actually being good. O.o Like, the one majorly canon-breaking thing is that Derik would never, ever deliberately set himself up for getting a new dragon, even a non-Pernese one. The rest... I can kinda see it. Even through xXxDragonLoverxXx's weird habit of sticking different thoughts together where the words happen to match.

So... Kudos for that? I guess?

~Neshomeh, conflicted. ^_^;

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