Subject: Aw, that was so lovely! :)
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Posted on: 2020-05-26 20:38:07 UTC

A bit too short, but that's what sequels are for, right? ;)

Oh, do write more, there's a dear. It always brightens up my day :)

~*Z

((I've been chewing over the idea of Mirror!Zing since this thread went up. So far, I've come up with just a little bit, to the effect of 'speaks her mind more frequently and with less worry about phrasing things correctly (apart from to get the best result for her--other people's feelings or misunderstandings aren't her concern)' and 'knows she seems innocent/harmless/sweet/friendly and, instead of trying to somehow shatter that image, which would probably be kind of difficult to do properly and annoying to keep working at, figured that the better way to go is to use it as much as suits her'. Basically, she's fine with being manipulative and frequently doesn't actually care much about how other people perceive her or react to what she says/does unless it's going to really inconvenience her.

...okay, looks like that's a more complete character than I'd thought. I may have even somewhat figured out how she talks now; we'll see, I suppose.

(Also, emoticons. Many emoticons. Overuse them. I left excessive punctuation more or less behind after early teenagerhood, but I could see mirror!me sticking a small handful of emoticons in everywhere.)

Re: the mission, I feel like I'm missing a joke with the Morrigan, and it's kind of jarring to see Agent hS not speaking, y'know, actual Tolkien languages, but that was very amusing and a fun read. The clones got me grinning right off, too. All in all, nicely done!

~Z))

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