Subject: Glad you liked it!
Posted on: 2023-10-13 18:59:41 UTC

I'm divided on the italics for thoughts myself... I do have it for thought-speak of course, so if Moira'd had any thoughts in that scene there would have been confusion as to whether or not it was a Flower speaking, and I want character's private thoughts to be consistent. Moira's thoughts are usually inferred more than written out, so they have never been italicised before, and I don't know... It's a matter of personal preference of course. I find an abundance of italics clutter the page, and prefer to have them for emphasis or thought-speak.

Thank you for reading!


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