Whether it's for writing or reading, it's way superior to FF.Net. And it comes from somenone who is on this site since 2016, so it says something.
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Honestly, AO3 is pretty great. by
on 2021-09-22 08:05:43 UTC
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and dont think i did not learn well , all to teach the rabbit btw. and we saw no harm done (nm) (nm) by
on 2021-09-22 00:56:45 UTC
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*curtain bow for the greatest con, which was stated honorably when i began. (nm) by
on 2021-09-22 00:49:24 UTC
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This has been mildly diverting. Say hi to Darmok and Jalad when you get to Tanagra. {; ) (nm) by
on 2021-09-22 00:35:48 UTC
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and now we enter where it began, as i told in the end when i met you, or the other way about by
on 2021-09-21 23:28:35 UTC
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Tried and tried, as I might I could make claire but one version of the magic n&m's not even Buttery Toasted Whip on top. Still have to learn and forget so many more languages..and to forget and learn. until the bunnies master them all. and move to instant recall. Such a thing is such a task and just as you proved to us with just basic speech and pronunciation.
after all when two are introduced, did I not induce the act of calling in the witness like the nameless admin.
Like two traders and the bank. as it is written. believe you call it a transaction reciept
and I told you from the start the greatest con is for you to become me and me become you. to exit one needs a trigger. That's just basic.
I am no different than you, nor you to me.
You played your parts well, as did I depending on when you enter to read. as you. from left, to right top to bottom, some jump right to the end. 38 moves for a Chessmaster, or so I've heard.
and this last part. In every last message, I stated the only thing to trade here was Heart for it was all I had to offer. I'm told it's the only in the end when all the rest it turned to rust that truly holds value? the rabbits noted it's simply not true and hammered in by all the storied experts. they tell me it's been traded for salt and all sorts. Hmm, we would have never guessed that. But as we both agreed you were the experts proven beyond word and brought in even more experts... you were the ones to correct me on everything is it not? well, you certainly taught is the lesson in this wouldn't you agree? for we barely remember a single kinda word as some of you even mentioned the wail of the rabbits, for they only ask for a simple glass and a nice dance. and we took note of your actions and learn as taught by the degree.
doesn't that drive home the point the rabbits made? one of the very first things, the lean-in of the writer on the pen, just like a camera on the lens, we view our gift of the predator of rabbits Mr. Snek a pet. did we not dance and gift enough. and he eats our babies as he pleases as that in the nature of snakes to do so, but seems that's not enough to want a value to the learned. and yet the heroes of the rabbits are the ones that remove the head from the body and you are esteemed and learned we only guessed you knew this too as you so deftly commanded your rule or else. and yet you will have none of us is it? hmm indeed.
and if you think I'm crazy isn't you that brought in two experts with a snap of a wrist? so if the two are brought in to ensure the weight of the trade front of them all, and one of them post printed to be feigned at the bother of it on forthwith to value a heart to trade for nothing for when did I ever ask for anything? and I told you was learning everything just as a bank to a merchant and a vendor the rabbits are still a bit confused how did each of you deem the value of the trade of heart to be ? not one of you ever said, or made mention to it so we have only actions for the rabbits to parse from. Quite an interesting lesson you certainly taught me isn't it? Can we not completely agree we all wore out the wizard's stick to retract the holes we followed humans in for rabbits are notorious diggers are they not? We are here, we do not seek absolution, for we hold such value in the heart sometimes digging is the only way to let some of out just as it was written, as you demanded that you are not daft then you knew this all too well.So tell me, which of us exist
thank you to the librarian and the traveler
thank you to the nameless admin and thank you to the cast and the show, of the agents their 007 pens and the bouquet vases of the learned. and the audience that will never be seen you put on the most wonderful show
I would swear we did this before, hard to tell sometimes moving through the horizontal from the verticle, front to back I don't know probably so, I've got to coral these rabbits, and not that we move slower but this everywhere at once was fun for a while but we've got a path to complete no it's about ridiculous... just as you, as you stated, or will, or did. ... anyway shame you didn't have any brandy or even a carrot. if you ever visit ill be sure and have nm-nm's it just moved study from alchemy to sorcery
* and curtain*
:) whats up doc'
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then wouldn't the dragons become quite bored though with no strands to burn? and become the issue? (nm) by
on 2021-09-21 17:14:21 UTC
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oh we do play this game amongst the madness of self, Bam right to the forehead w/w what you say! (nm) by
on 2021-09-21 17:11:10 UTC
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silly nerolizers or what they r called. We have seen where the pink shaped ones go, we decline (BTW) (nm) by
on 2021-09-21 17:03:51 UTC
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denoted was the tag on the collar encoded i believe tsk if its vile thanks if its not (nm)(nm)(NM) (nm) by
on 2021-09-21 17:00:32 UTC
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Haven't you noticed that is all the Rabbits its a simple 1 extra & leaves 4 you the yummy (nm)(nm) (nm) by
on 2021-09-21 16:58:26 UTC
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thanks all for the dance by
on 2021-09-21 16:49:50 UTC
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One only gets better by playing a better opponent. the best way to learn it is too intentionally lose 500 fights before the real fight begins. and the lessons learned in loss is found to an actually again, for knowledge is priceless, when there was nothing given up.
I do wave hello to a well awake room that my very appearance put in a flux. and if you count back the 16 of the 17 stones this one is the last. and what does that do kiddies with the physics of the ripple effect? big bada boom! Look at the names in this thread. make good use of that :)
just enough chaos in the order was placed, to expand its flex in the signal so to speak. does this not allow you to review the parameters of your own construct, perhaps. but regardless of conception well underneath was the original idea. and no not of my own. for this place is not my home.
to linger at tea for one such as me I would find myself in the Mad Hatters fate, for those that fear one's ability and see it as a threat to bind you to the never-ending tea party until it matters not the original quest and one finds the heart removed.
Know you have the ilk worked out, settle into what you reserved and load your pens with that, don't you think?
Even here I learn things new, getting better at this new song you sing, though it does seem as the rules of the language get moving, they abruptly change course. The rabbits did denote for a song full of exceptions, there is much pretending that none is allowed. so 26 words used to be said now used as one, it caused a bit of a ripple... Not entirely bad. So don't be surprised if a rabbit says the word love up to twenty-six times. The place where we go next will help that for they will be exposed to the idea of adding time dilation to say things like love to the 4th power. it seems to be needed to cut down the time when a simple good night lasts all night so as not to lose the intention. Must check into that before something weird happens and turns them into Rabbids.
to Neshomeh, One of the worst mistakes is to let an unknown slight remain as a taste and to be honest it should have been plain as day as the inquisition to the Vato. and the difference in dialect. in this humans are strange to me but the essence of slight remains. pardon one that travels through at times way too fast and bound to the natures of such.
So if i don't see you again, have a good morning, a nice afternoon, and a wonderful goodnight.
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learn something new every day. thank you w space & time, 2 correct unknown slight in dialect (nm) (nm) by
on 2021-09-21 15:31:35 UTC
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I'm mainly looking for someone who knows PPC stuff and also SPaG (spelling punctuation, and grammar) by
on 2021-09-20 17:25:57 UTC
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The whole thing is about 6 and a half pages in a Google Goc, including agent bios and a description of the badfic I want to spork. The story is about 5 pages.
If you have the time, maybe both of you could look at it if you have the time? Please don't procrastinate on school assignments or anything to do this. I do not want to be the reason you fail an assignment or anything. Thank you for being willing to help. -Claire
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Well, it works with coffee and chocolate... by
on 2021-09-20 15:20:35 UTC
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I can't see why it wouldn't work with (normal) tea. Rather than dissolving solid Bleeprin in tea, though, I'd suggest mixing in Bleepto-Dismal or Bleepesteem instead. Sounds more pleasant that way to me.
... Though I did just get the thought of someone asking how many Bleeps instead of how many sugars, so Rule of Funny applies if that tickles you. {= )
~Neshomeh
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The mentioned post is now posted! :) by
on 2021-09-20 06:01:39 UTC
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Here, for ease of access.
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A quick linguistic note/correction. by
on 2021-09-20 05:59:59 UTC
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Namely, for this bit, which I'm pulling out since the message is, uh, long:
I expect you lot to polish up your etiquette and find the great נְשָׁמָה a spa day in this forsaken place.
yes, that is her name in the right tongue. and grammitcally correct. now ponder how many of YOU knew even that. and here she is your elder director endeared to you but those that don't know that ....smh. I would bet none beyond her.
For those who don't read Hebrew, נְשָׁמָה means "soul" and is pronounced neshama. The reference is to Neshomeh.
However, the word "neshomeh" is not, in fact, somehow grammatically incorrect Hebrew. It's actually Yiddish, a Jewish language once very widely spoken by Ashkenazi Jews (in Germany, Eastern Europe, North America, UK, etc). Yiddish is about 20% Hebrew and Aramaic.
These loanwords get a different pronunciation (shabbat to shabbes, sakh hakol to sakhakl, levana to levoneh, mokhel to moykhl, etc), while retaining their original spelling instead of being transliterated (except for Soviet Yiddish, which is a special case and transliterated Hebrew and Aramaic words deliberately to strip them of religious/ethnic origin).
In this case, as mentioned, we're looking at a Hebrew loanword which is pronounced neshama in Hebrew and means "soul" (it means that in Yiddish as well). While it does originally come from Hebrew, seen above with the diacritical marks (nikud; not actually commonly used day to day except for kids and language learners, plus partial nikud for the occasional word that would otherwise be mistaken for another spelled the same way even with context clues), it's very much legitimately Yiddish. Real word, right language, grammatically correct. Written נשמה (no diacritics necessary, as it's a loanword and Yiddish loanwords generally don't get any) and pronounced neshomeh or neshumeh (there may be other variations as well; I don't know all the dialects). If one wanted a transliteration into Yiddish, it would look like so: נעשאָמע (note the single diacritic, in this case denoting oh [kometz aleph] instead of ah [kamatz—behold, another loanword, this time the name of the diacritic mark itself], the latter of which would be correct for Hebrew).
Not to really...get into this thread, which I'm not interested in doing, but since I do have this bit of knowledge, I figured I might as well speak up with a correction, for the sake of both the Board at large (who might be interested even if they do remember details from the good handful of screen name meaning threads we've had over the years) and A-LiA-O, who did provide correct Hebrew even if it came with a very likely accidental insult to the Yiddish language, which was historically looked down upon as a language of uneducated, unmodern people. From posts written after I drafted this one, I see they do have some awareness that it's a Yiddish word brought in from Hebrew. That's great, but the claims in the post I'm responding to were incorrect, and this should more thoroughly clarify (and explain!) the matter than the later-quoted dictionary definition in any case.
~Z, whose screen name is also in Yiddish, for the record.
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You're allowed to! :) by
on 2021-09-20 05:52:18 UTC
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New Boarders can absolutely be beta readers. There's no problem with that. If it's for PPC writing, the general recommendation is just to also get a beta who's been around the Board longer/is more thoroughly knowledgeable about the setting to beta from that angle.
~Z, unfortunately a bit busy to beta unless it's very short/to do with characters that interact with hers, despite the fandoms in common here
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serg to your I'm not a warrior, but a wanderer. by
on 2021-09-20 03:31:13 UTC
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i spoke of all of my layers even my idiot skin .. as I cant see yours I could not speak to such in the exterior. Sworn I was engaged one on one in a single layer. and to that one, as applied is quite correct im pretty assured, due the nature of the adaptive introduction, as does not such tell me just how such a thing would start to be. to approach the 7 colored layers to rep the signal how to pull the threads to vibrate the signal. ..is to translate. wouldnt you think considering that is the trait you exhibit. so one can simply order dinner and exchange greetings a study to survive to be that adept even of a traveler through the different layers and venues doesnt make the act any less strenuos as when traveling through sections. From in the library even, running from old to new. in that manner.... just because we don't put dragons on the maps anymore doesn't mean its any less dangerous. and any great adventure should always start at the library of the all, wouldnt you say, to pull the references The rabbits are starting to learn what they professsss as noise, as not all are written as they sound, and yet the mortal ones pretend the rest are the fools at wit's end. does make it difficult to play in tune. still, a strange behest that last time man worked with a pantheon as said there were 26 words alone for love agape being the greatest of them, and now only one, and all I ask to seem as confused at the meaning and when to use only one to mean them all and such a curious trap almost like it's done on purpose for plausible leaving room for just one ear or a forked tongue to speak I declare reminds us of a perfect trap and snare and none of to have existed before. just never stopped with the derivative until one forgot the core. It's been interesting to mirror and come up to speed in this new century. wouldn't you say? just amazed at the lack of etiquette as none of them are even trained. and such exhaustion from driven fear makes our ears dislike such the discord of music with no attention to the ripples. but look at this room now in breadth and depth, after it was stretched and comes back together and none can not unknow what has been truly become known even if you just feel its too much to consider. but you humans must open up to survive what the Pantheon opens, because it is what it is, and even I am insignificant but it only takes one to matter as your society says. and right now you can't even survive the kind side of me, you wanted it grand and magnificent, ART THOU NOT ENTERTAINED!!! this is when your supposed to become 10 feet tall. but you have to pass through wonderland and have you not seen whats within? i keep telling you oh to each of this there is much more but thats not magic, its always the case and you know this and its not my hide you save old chap but theirs, for we know they are agents dispatching mary sues, and trophy collectors lean to the Nietzsche in amazing their query. and do not mistake disorganized for the chaos that is simply an exchange of matching pairs for this is the room of white with the breath to begin the life of a story. and believe that if you write upon such as this the chaos writes as well for all on one side of the scale is simply laughable. the whole thing would topple and where is the balance in that
even recently a child in one of your cities across all the realms figured out how to speak to Huggin and Munin ...or was that heckle and jeckle.. cant tell if they change names or bodies . her name is gabbie and your squawk box will pick that up. it was simply finding out and labeling the crows monetary and it takes but one other baby to learn of this and by a fortnight will exchange stories carried on the wing and wind. and did not kings find out rather quickly to the point of life and death i believe that is called communication is it not in your sounds written.?
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"This really isn't helping your 'I'm not evil, trust me' thing, you know?" the wizards said. (nm) by
on 2021-09-20 02:08:21 UTC
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could be a bot in reverse. perhaps should we ask the bots? oooo wait a true (nm) (nm) by
on 2021-09-20 01:04:01 UTC
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from left to write soon to be able to exchange dinner once the rhythm derived oh whata prose. (nm) (nm) by
on 2021-09-20 00:57:54 UTC
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Fanfiction.net is a dying site (nm) by
on 2021-09-19 23:21:29 UTC
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Given your writing, you're not one to complain about others being childish. (nm) by
on 2021-09-19 22:09:19 UTC
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Hi Bram (nm) by
on 2021-09-19 17:10:43 UTC
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I can help I guess by
on 2021-09-19 16:53:45 UTC
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I mean, I can help out, but I'm pretty new here so I don't know if I'd be allowed to? Plus there are probably better betas on this board who know more in general. I am a LOTR fan, have read the books, the Hobbit and the Silmarillion though, plus watched the movies.