I really felt along with the characters - both of them, in their own way - and it's just... really good. Your teacher was right. Congratsi :D
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That was very good :) by
on 2010-06-15 23:56:00 UTC
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Possibly the PPC General Store. by
on 2010-06-15 23:45:00 UTC
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Or you can just grind up some beef.
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*Glomps back* (nm) by
on 2010-06-15 22:33:00 UTC
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A community of writers? by
on 2010-06-15 22:29:00 UTC
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Unlikely? Are you kidding?
Try http://www.fictionpress.com/
But thanks for sharing it with us, too!
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batter-dipped cracklings by
on 2010-06-15 22:22:00 UTC
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It's a telling sign of a story's quality when you get to the end of the story and say 'what, that's it?' and then in hindsight realize how perfect an ending it was.
It's brilliant and evil how it makes you want to learn more about this girl, why she's with this guy despite how much she seems to dislike him. Is this dislike new? Caused by some recent development that's altered her perception of him? Perhaps she hangs out with him for superficial reasons? Perhaps she stays with him despite her dislike because she dislikes herself and wants to punish herself - or because she thinks he'd be able to help her get over what may be a crippling depression.
I'll have to read it again when I have time.
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As the ships are sentient... by
on 2010-06-15 22:19:00 UTC
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... they'll keep each other company.
You can mention my Agents if needed, of course. They'll bring their own cocktail, which they named 'ZPM'. Don't ask why, but Krisprolls is said to abuse it, and that's what makes him so energetic. Truth is, he's naturally so. (Whatever says it's because he naturally produces the thing in his blood)
(ZPMs are huge energy sources in Stargate Atlantis)
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Re: Mission Up! by
on 2010-06-15 21:18:00 UTC
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I actually like the original squirrelking trollfics, but this one sounds like a badly done attempt at mimicking them. The sentient sandwich thing was a funny touch.
There are a few mistakes I want to point out in the opening scene:
"'every game every made'" should be "every game ever made"
"then you this was coming" should be "then you knew this was coming"
"said nothing as halfheartedly" should be "said nothing as he halfheartedly"
Also, since Danny wouldn't finish it, I will:
IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!
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Indeed, a cat must have a proper name. by
on 2010-06-15 21:15:00 UTC
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And that one definately seems fitting. *pets BerĂșthiel*
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Oh... oh my by
on 2010-06-15 21:15:00 UTC
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Tell Danny that he has my deepest sympathy. That was awful. Though, I suppose the idea of a giant sandwich is mildly amusing. It reminds me of that one guy from the show Word Girl.
Anyway, good job killing the thing. Hope next time the mission makes Laura go berserk. Danny's been feeling the brunt of the badfic horror, or so it seems.
--anamia
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Never mind by
on 2010-06-15 20:21:00 UTC
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There were two <i> tags, it seems. The second </i>-in-subject fixed it.
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Thanks. (nm) by
on 2010-06-15 20:21:00 UTC
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Didn't work. This, though? (nm) by
on 2010-06-15 20:16:00 UTC
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Kiww the wabbit!Sue/Kiww the wabbit!Sue/Kiww the wabbit!Sue/ by
on 2010-06-15 20:11:00 UTC
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Rosebel and Her Life Before by ink-splotter08 reviews
Before Rosebel had Fiver... she had control of her life. She was lonely but her life was predictable; until she met a rabbit who spun her life back together- and his name was Hahira...
Watership Down - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,149 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-3-09 - Complete
My comment: What is Vilthuril? Sliced dandelion greens?
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Hi, welcome back! by
on 2010-06-15 20:08:00 UTC
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*grimace* I feel your pain with fluky computers. I'm lucky enough not to have had any issues that last THAT long, though... at least not ones that prevent me from doing anything.
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As for the third one... by
on 2010-06-15 20:05:00 UTC
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Maybe waiting would work? You wouldn't run into a lot of crimes against canon until the canon shows up. You can charge for not tagging a crossover, though. I should think.
Also, I don't suppose you'd care to mention any specific Holmes 2009 fics for those of us too lazy-arsed to look on our own?
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Ah, buggerit. (Millennium hand and shrimp.) by
on 2010-06-15 19:58:00 UTC
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De-italicizing now.
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Last I checked, we liked newbies... by
on 2010-06-15 19:57:00 UTC
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Have a Mary Poppins Carpetbag to carry it all. (And a plover to keep the one from Tawaki company.)
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Welcome. Here's a tall ship. by
on 2010-06-15 18:16:00 UTC
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Fair winds!
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That... by
on 2010-06-15 18:01:00 UTC
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I'm not quite sure what to say (write, actually) to this.
All I could come up with sounds inadequate in my ears.
...
So, let's just go with following: Absolutely stunning, and beautiful. It makes me think. I am not quite sure about what, but it's something that could be straight out of anyone's live, and the way you wrote this piece... I am in awe.
A heartfelt "Thank you." for sharing this with us.
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Re: A multi-part mission in different fandoms could be fun. by
on 2010-06-15 17:42:00 UTC
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I could help, as well. I have seen all movies, and I have read quite a few books.
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Re: That how computers work... by
on 2010-06-15 17:33:00 UTC
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Don't know. It just wouldn't work... My computer itself was fine, but the internet connection, no matter what way, LAN or wireless, refused to work. I had to do a complete reconfiguration, several times, to make it work along with changing my provider, to make it work at home. Still refuses to work in other networks or public access points.
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Oh... by
on 2010-06-15 17:30:00 UTC
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Nobody has ever given me a pet cat before... I do own a cheetah (thanks to wikimaster) and a bengal tiger (forgotten from whom), but a pet cat...
THANKS!!
So nice... *wipes a tear*
And I name the cat... I know! BerĂșthiel, like the Queen of Gondor, wive of Falastur, who owned nine black and one white cat and was famous for them. Sounds fitting?