Subject: Thoughts
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Posted on: 2020-05-26 03:05:16 UTC

You did a good job with imagery and with describing emotions in the Gerry piece. The opening lines seemed ot set that up pretty well.

I did not predict the twist on Every Thread is Torn.

Keys was interesting, and I could overall fallow it and enjoy the ride despite not being too up to date on Dr. Who.

Humans May Be Fragile was a nice bit of character interaction.

I read the rest of the stuff, too.

I don't really have detailed comments, but I figured I'd at least jump in with an "I read the things and I approve"

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