Subject: That was a good chapter!
Posted on: 2023-01-29 12:50:41 UTC

You're handling the current colaboration between the Golden Trio and Malfoy very well: both parties are interested in sonving the matter for their own reasons, but they still don't trust each other. Clever way to still have the Polyjuice Potion plot still happen, too! Though, to be fair, I'm not sure they actually still need it considering at least Harry and Draco can take each other out of the prime suspect list. (Nice tweak with the Bludger chasing Draco and not harry, but still having it hit Harry in the end!)

All in all, you're keeping up the excellent worldbuilding. Good on you!

Question. is "could convince you the sky was green" actually an English saying, or is it some clever wordplay? Japanese and maybe other Asian languages have a murkier line between blue and green - there was a Detective Conan case that used it as part of a plot about solving the dfferences between three discrepant witnesses' accounts (the suspect was eported as having a black shirt by one, a blue one by another and a green one by the third. The black shirt was due to a tinted widnow, and the green/blue problem was because the witness was an old person who still used the word that used to mean both)

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