Subject: Alright, I'll see if I can explore the dynamics more.
Posted on: 2023-02-21 06:42:52 UTC

Thanks for the feedback, by the way. I never realized how potentially… weird my writing could be in regards to touchy real-life subjects. I'll try to avoid stepping on any toes.

The Eagleverse is an original continuum wherein multiple Earth countries made the jump to space and became feuding empires, but I'll make sure to keep references to the politics of the 'verse to a minimum. The PPC is, after all, meant to be parody, not satire.

I intentionally chose obscure continua for my agents so I could play others' lack of knowledge about them for laughs.

I'm thinking about whether to expand the original prompt or write a second one, where the two agents have smoothed over the roughest parts in their dynamic and are more at ease with one another. I'm leaning towards the latter. When I'm done, I'll update the document.

I'll see if I can find an older fic to spork, too.

Again, thanks for the feedback. This has all been a huge help for me as a writer, especially since I usually don't get detailed feedback like this.

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