Subject: The well-written Sue.
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Posted on: 2011-09-04 04:58:00 UTC
We shall have to disagree on whether Daine's series is a good story; I personally found it and her to be very bland even as a child, nowhere near The Lioness Quartet. But let us take Drizzt Do'Urden.
I shall give you a quote from my first PPC mission:
"And there are a handful of good Mary Sues out there. When I was younger, my hero was Drizzt Do'Urden. He's good looking, has violet eyes and white hair, is different from the other drow, doesn't age like humans do, is the best of the best with weapons, has a tragic past, is noble, wise, compassionate, yadda yadda yadda. He's a regular Marty Stu. But he's a plausible and well-written one. It's when Sueish or Stuish characteristics neuter good writing that it gets messy."
Now, I shall give you a quote from Mythtaken, in response to my saying:
"Ultimately, Mary Sue is bowling-with-bumpers safe as a way to experience a story. She is unrealistically beautiful, inhumanly powerful, and always gets rewarded for everything she does with only the barest of struggles. She can’t fail. She can’t get humiliated. The story itself will dutifully remove all real obstacles from her shining path. And a character who needs her author to do all that work for her is not a character who has any sort of power. On the contrary, that character is weak."
This is such a wonderfully succinct definition of Mary Sue and why she's an example of bad writing! I keep seeing people say stuff like there's nothing wrong with her if she's well written, and being totally perplexed, because as far as I'm concerned she can't be well written. That's the whole point.
At this point in time, my opinion is somewhere in the middle of the two of these. Can a Sue be well-written? In rare instances, yes. Can a Sue be well-written because s/he is a Sue? Absolutely not. The thing I remember most about Drizzt is not how he had "Twinkle" and "Icingdeath" as his speshul swords, but how he hesitantly forged his first human connection with Catti-Brie. And to borrow from Phobos again, if I feel fondness for Rapunzel from Tangled, it is in spite of the fact that rough-and-tough barbarians are all nice to her and she splashes through a puddle without getting dirty.
But then I compare Rapunzel to a character like Mulan, who was clumsy and awkward and didn't fit in, and worked harder than anyone else to become a warrior, and suffered through several humiliating moments before she found her stride, and got badly hurt saving the day, and who found her self-realization not in seeing something shiny, but in helping other people, and I think...oh. Oh, this is how it's supposed to be. This is a character I can really love.
The message that Rapunzel learned was: "The world isn't such a big, scary place, after all, and you are more than equipped to handle it." But it could have been: "The world is such a big, scary place, but it's totally worth it even if you get hurt." It could have been: "There is no WAY you are equipped to handle the whole wide world on your first sojourn outside...no one is...but you can learn." Wouldn't those messages have been so much better than what we got? And wouldn't they ring so much truer to the audience's (even kids') life experiences?
Mary Sueism is a mark of poor writing. Some characters are just strong enough to be liked anyway. And in the long run, their being Sues doesn't really do them any favors, because the fact that they are so speshul calls all of their achievements into question. Rapunzel might be fun to pal around with, but if she didn't have her Aura of Smooth, would she really have been able to go through with everything her adventure asked of her? I guess we'll never know.
~Araeph