Subject: Mary Sues v.s. Strong OCs
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Posted on: 2011-09-01 00:01:00 UTC
What can I add to this discussion?
Well, I noticed that Maximum Ride is on the list of Canonical Sues. I disagree with that. She puts on that act because she needs to be tough and play the part of a leader. But her internal monologues show that she's just a teenager who has had a terrible life for as far back as she can remember, and it really SHOWS. Her she reacts believably, putting her family first even though she really disagrees with them sometimes. Yes, she's bad ass and she has had two good looking guys vying for her at the same time. One of those guys was BRED to want to have her children. It's stated in book, that this guy was made to be her "perfect other half". As for being speshul, she acts like its a blessing and a curse. She's part bird(she has wings) but is sensitive about showing them due to being in hiding.
Now then, lets talk about her "perfect other half". This guy is described as being "super model gorgeous"(or something to that effect) and everyone swoons when they see him. He can see the future, everyone but Max and the other guy who wants her take right to him, he can heal his own wounds, and what pisses me off the most is that he KNOWS that he was made to want Max's babies, but isn't shown to be all that distressed about it.
If I was put into that situation(which I am in my own way due to my OCD and the compulsions I have where I KNOW that it's not necessary to repeat my actions over and over and over again, but if FEELS like I should and then I get all distressed about feeling helpless over the whole thing, please pardon the run on) I would be pretty upset about it.
Yet this guy isn't. His entire existence is based around having Max's children, he knows that, and yet the most we see him angst over it is the occasional frustration.
Now you could argue that he was brain washed into it not bothering, but here's the thing: If this were true, why hasn't the flock tried to help him out? Point out when he's being all horny towards Max, have Max reject him as part of helping him, heck she doesn't even do THAT to his face! Max just sort of goes along with it, is confused about her feeling for a bit, then her boyfriend oh so conveniently leaves the flock because "thats whats best". The next book she and her "perfect other half" are having sex. At the Eifle tower. "Silhouetted against the night sky".
Who the hell is the Stu here?!
To sum up, Max is a believable character. This other guy is a Stu.