Subject: What makes Sues/Stus?
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Posted on: 2011-08-31 14:50:00 UTC

WARNING - the following contains lots and lots of opinion.

Mary Sue, Marty Stu - the name is irrelevant. It would be nice to have some alternative gender-neutral phrase that snaps off the tongue, but we have to make do with the language we've been given. Unfortunately, said language opens us up to accusations of sexism and the like. Yes, it's true that male characters in both fanfiction and original fiction are given more leeway when it comes to being shallow self-inserts. Yes, female characters are more frequently bashed. Yes, it's a crying shame. But until we all become professional book critics (and how the world will shudder on that day, oh yes!), there is little we can personally do besides shout in the wilderness of the internet.

But anyway, what makes a Sue/Stu a Sue/Stu? Whenever I peruse a potential Suefic/Stufic, I have a mental checklist - a basic litmus test, if you will. If the story hits most or all of the points, then it's mission material.

Does the character have depth? If so, is that depth believable?
Flat, one-dimensional characters are not good for propelling a story. Neither are characters with personalities or backgrounds that make no sense. Here's an example from a DMS mission I'm working on wrapping up: the main character (a young woman) owns twelve nightclubs AND was a former top SAS sniper. While you're all counting the contradictions in that very short sentence, I'll be on the next point.

Is the character likable?
Note: I don't mean 'likable' as in 'morally good.' A well-crafted villain protagonist can be just as interesting a character as the Boy-Scoutiest of heroes. Let me be more blunt: is the character a douche and, if so, does her/his behavior go on uncalled? The tenth Fellowship member verbally castrates Boromir and Sam every chance she/he gets while everyone else watches and laughs. The fifth Survivor opens fire on a crowd of uninfected people without provocation and everyone else pays it no mind. That sort of thing.

Is the character substituting herself/himself for a canonical character?
What's that? Sam's dead? Don't worry Frodo, I, [insert name here], will help you take the Ring to Mount Doom! Along the way, we can explore how deeply in wuv with each other we are.

Is the character violating the rules of the canon without a proper and believable explanation?
'Proper and believable' are key words here. Anyone can make excuses for why their extra Organization XIII member can feel genuine emotions, or why their intelligent Special Infected OC has fully-functioning wings. If said excuses don't fit the rules of the world, then something is wrong.

Anyway, that's what I feel about this issue. I hope that all made sense and wasn't just me babbling.

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