I'm writing a Doctor Who Fanfiction University.
http://simplystories.webs.com/gallifreyfanfictionu.htm
Is it alright? I've still got four more prologues to go, then I'll put up the first chapter.
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Don't worry. by
on 2010-06-05 00:52:00 UTC
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It's not our policy to tell authors we are criticising their work, and we make a point of only ranting about the content of stories, not the writers.
A question, though; you said "we worked out the Turin issue" - do you mean you're her beta-reader?
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Re: I'm making notes of all this stuff by
on 2010-06-05 00:43:00 UTC
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Heh. Alton Brown would be proud of you for multi-tasking. ^^
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semi-badfic (LOTR) by
on 2010-06-04 22:22:00 UTC
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5964797/1/
Don't tell the author I posted this. She's very nice and I don't want to insult her. It's not terrible, but it is tenth walker and Mary-Sue-ish, though she hadn't chosen who the romance will be with yet (Legolas, Boromir, or Gimli). What will really get you is the tense. Oh, the tense. I think it gets worse in later chapters, so be patient.
If you want your agents to go crazy with tense shifts, PPC this story.
P.S. We worked out the Turin issue. She was confused, but she did try. So cut her some slack there, please.
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Have a Cheetah! by
on 2010-06-04 20:32:00 UTC
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Feed it only Generic Meat!
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Thanks! (nm) by
on 2010-06-04 20:26:00 UTC
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I know what you mean. by
on 2010-06-04 20:20:00 UTC
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I'm from the US as well, and had the same image. Yesterday was actually the first time I looked them up and saw what they were.
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Be my guest. (nm) by
on 2010-06-04 19:58:00 UTC
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Bleep-On-The-Rocks right here. by
on 2010-06-04 19:50:00 UTC
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No, just no.*bangs head on the wall*
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Quick question for you by
on 2010-06-04 19:43:00 UTC
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Actually, I have two, the first being: may I borrow the male intern from your introductory piece? And the second question is: may I name him Frances?
Thanks,
--anamia
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Re: Don't Worry. by
on 2010-06-04 17:19:00 UTC
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Being from the US I was never entirely certain what they were. I thought either some kind of gummy bear type candy or jelly beans. I have actually been wondering how long it would be until someone pointed out the name. Hehe. Eh, oh well, they go with that scarf, even if you don't have curly hair. :D
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Welcome! Have a stuffed moogle! by
on 2010-06-04 17:05:00 UTC
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So fresh, you can smell the tannery! Please do not throw it at anything, as there may or may not be an explosive hidden within it.
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Welcome. Here's a tall ship. by
on 2010-06-04 17:00:00 UTC
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Fair winds and have a nice trip here!
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Welcome. Here's a tall ship. by
on 2010-06-04 16:54:00 UTC
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Fair winds!
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That makes no sense... by
on 2010-06-04 16:52:00 UTC
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What. Harry? When there are plenty of other allied families for the Malfoys to choose, they choose Harry?
Gah.
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First plover! (nm) by
on 2010-06-04 15:42:00 UTC
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Greetings! by
on 2010-06-04 14:59:00 UTC
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Enjoy these Really Cool Shades (TM) as a welcoming gift.