Subject: Chapter 8 review.
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Posted on: 2018-06-28 10:38:00 UTC

Ha, Sergio's timeline manipulations are hilarious. ^^ And Corolla's are nice and sneaky.

I like the mismatched furniture. I also like the fact that the girls still don't care about Sergio's past (in a good way): it's clear he wants to be all angsty about it, but Corolla in particular is having none of that.

In fact, in general it's great to have Corolla in the field at last. She's great. ^
^ The whole snowmobile scene was brilliant, and her interactions later in the chapter are building nicely both the stories of the overall quest, and of Sergio's personal arc.

Favourite line: “I’m still going to do my best. I’m not accepting a Bad End for you two, I’m aiming for the Perfect Golden Ending!” Corolla is a dedicated shipper. ^_^

... I will probably talk less about Corolla from here on out. Maybe. No promises.

hS

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