Subject: I finally figured out what I want to say
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Posted on: 2021-05-06 18:59:18 UTC
I just have a list of thoughts in no particular order:
- I like reading about Gall getting excited for things and snarking at the badfic.
- The hyperlinks turning into broken images for the Sue's clothes instead of actual clothes is hilarious.
- I like how the mission reads like a story than an MST.
- I think Derik getting haunted by Erik was foreshadowed well. Also reading about Derik and Erik was interesting.
- I like how you summarized the not-so-noteable parts of the badfic so that the mission doesn't drag on longer than it needs to.
- Gall and Derik ranking the costumes the characters wore at the party is amusing.
- I like the resolution. Gall got a bunch of loot including a violin for Derik after a mission!
- I wonder if it would be funnier if the cape's embroidered words turned out to be "something in French" or the French word for "something"
- The scene where the Frog Choir mimed the YouTube audio gives me a funny mental image.
- The Sue was super pretentious throughout the fic.
- I love this line: "Gall greeted her dragon, told him he was a good boy, and promised to buy him a special treat with the proceeds from her Halloween-costume haul."
Overall, I enjoyed the mission!