I agree.
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Always a bad sign when the summary creates minis. (nm) by
on 2010-06-20 15:19:00 UTC
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On a similar note... by
on 2010-06-20 14:31:00 UTC
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Anyone seen FaCe ThE StRaNgE yet? It's probably a troll, but...
Here's the link: http://xdallyx.webs.com/
And here's the description, ripped right from the site:
"When Dally Darkblood, a vampire Ravenclaw, goes to Hogwarts, with her best fren, Edward Cullen, and then Hiei, things began to get intresting. Shadow the Hegehog comes and then Dumbleddore turns out to be not so good after ale. With the asstence of close friends and family and a lil wizard magic, Hogwarts will be sale fo the students once more..."
I'd say "enjoy", but that wouldn't be applicable for this wreck.
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Possible continuuum destruction spotted! by
on 2010-06-20 14:13:00 UTC
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If somebody here can read french (and i'ts brave enough... it's made of something like more than fifty chapters, plus extra materials like animated .gif), I found what it has the opportunity of being some EXTREME canon-disrupting mega crossover. (I cannot read French well, so I didn't read it.)
http://senshilegend.free.fr/
It feaures characters from Card Captor Sakura, Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, Megaman NT Warrior, Pokemon, Digimon, and a lot other canons... all turned into Sailor Moon lookalikes.
Bring plenty of canon material, candles, bells and plenty of Bleeprin.
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Unsure if it's safe to eat them, though ... by
on 2010-06-20 11:59:00 UTC
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As Naomi said in part 2, these things are diabetes waiting to happen. (I know diabetes doesn't work that way in real life, but these are Sues we're talking about.)
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I was thinking something like Evelyn Eliza's death ... by
on 2010-06-20 11:57:00 UTC
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... in Technical Errors, where they read to her from the canon until she exploded. Or having the Naruto OFU staff take turns stomping them. Not sure what they'd have to be raped to death BY if we did that ... I knew I need to watch more anime ^_^ Evan's Spiked Tentacles of Forced Intrusion?
Though I was considering, at some point, having S&S and/or L&F leave Sues for the Nighthunt as a peace offering. Don't think even that would be unpleasant enough for these, though ...
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Mission Plug! by
on 2010-06-20 10:23:00 UTC
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Ian and Lee kill a rather annoying Kid!Sue infecting the CSI: 'Verse in the latest of their missions.
A slightly OT-note: I tend to read and write pretty quickly; a four-day period between "official" mission logs will probably be my vague standard at the moment, though that might change in the near future. If I'm going too fast, please feel free to tell me. I'll try to do my best with asking for betas and so on, and I always welcome con-crit of the non-flame-y type.
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WHO THREW A GRENADE IN OUR RC??? (nm) by
on 2010-06-20 10:07:00 UTC
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Welcome. Here's a tall ship. by
on 2010-06-20 10:06:00 UTC
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Fair winds!
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Happy birthday, here's a tall ship. by
on 2010-06-20 10:04:00 UTC
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Watch out, this one is not a fan of Krisprolls's.
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But it's a... bean. by
on 2010-06-20 10:02:00 UTC
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Admittedly, an odd little humanoid sapient bean with hair, but still. I can see possibly slashing Wario with Luigi, but Peasley's like a poorly caricatured version of Prince Valiant. Yeesh, what some people do for their jollies...
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The prince is from... by
on 2010-06-20 09:54:00 UTC
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...Mario & luigi: Super Star Saga, a GBA RPG game.
The prince is often slashed with Luigi since 2003.
Here's the wiki article: http://www.mariowiki.com/Prince_Peasley
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I'm not familiar with Peasley. by
on 2010-06-20 09:51:00 UTC
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What game is he in? I'm afraid I've only played Super Mario 64, Mario Galaxy, Super Smash Bros (Brawl and Melee), and Mario Party 8.
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Roleplay Plug!: St Dymphna's Academy by
on 2010-06-20 09:48:00 UTC
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St Dymphna's Academy is currently accepting new players.
SDA, for those of you who aren't aware, is a Mary Sue Academy RP.
What does this mean, you might be wondering?
It means all the characters are Mary Sues or Marty Stus. In a school filled with them.
The students of SDA are given typical Mary Sue or Marty Stu traits- but the hilarity comes from trying to play the charater straight, in the sense of accepting consequences to their behavior while at the school, or trying to make them the most Sueish or Stuish character possible- just to watch them flail in this new environment where they're no longer special, or unique.
Indulge in creaing a one third human-fairy-elf mix who is also a OCD katana wielding cyborg, or a bewinged genius sniper princess who has something of a weight problem, or any bizarre combination you can think of.
And then play them according to how you made them and see what happens next.
Both student and teacher applications are being accepted until the ninth of July, and the next game semester begins on the eighth, however, I would like to stress that I would prefer student applications.
Apping for townies- characters who live in the local town- is not restricted to this deadline.
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Luigi by Prince Peasley *headdesk* (nm) by
on 2010-06-20 09:47:00 UTC
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Thank You very much by
on 2010-06-20 09:25:00 UTC
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Whenever I get permission sooner or later, I will need beta readers since I tend to overlook mistakes.
My first target is a Mario Mpreg story, I kid you not.
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I'd be more than happy to beta by
on 2010-06-20 09:02:00 UTC
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Feel free to contact me over LJ. I'm on summer break at the moment, so I've got quite a bit of free time. I can also help with LJ formatting as well, if you'd like.
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re. Tenses by
on 2010-06-20 08:45:00 UTC
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- Tenses are a property of verbs; so you need to be able to pick out the verb in a sentence. If you can't do that, I suggest googling it and learning.
2. Once you know where the verbs are, determine your tense.
Present tense (something that's happening right now): "The cat sits on the chair."
Past tense (something that's already happened): "The cat sat on the chair."
Future tense (something that will happen): "The cat will sit on the chair."
(There are also past perfect, present perfect, and future perfect tenses. They're not as important; basically, they're used for describing what has been happening at some point in time, rather than what is happening.)
You may actually look up verbs in the dictionary. They have the tenses listed there.
Mainly, though, at this point if you're going to write anything, you NEED a beta. It will probably take you a good few months to nail down tenses properly, especially with a learning disability in that area. It's very much like a dyslexic writer: You're going to have to learn as much as you can yourself, and then get a very good editor to catch what you can't.
- Tenses are a property of verbs; so you need to be able to pick out the verb in a sentence. If you can't do that, I suggest googling it and learning.
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Well, if you want to get technical about it... by
on 2010-06-20 08:12:00 UTC
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...then no, it's not allowed. But in practice, it's done often, and actually preferred by the permission givers because it shows that you can write in the spirit and style of the PPC. (Disclaimer: I am not a permission giver, nor have I consulted any permission givers before writing this. The views expressed are purely the result of my own observations and conclusions. Thank you.)
--anamia
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Yeah, lack of edits sucks. by
on 2010-06-20 06:15:00 UTC
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Also, the tense problem is my main problem since I was a third grader. I blame on my minor form of autism which I viewed it as a curse which hindered my grammar.
Oh, I'll add some quirks in my missions.
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Oh gawd. by
on 2010-06-20 05:37:00 UTC
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You know how you're always saying your death-by-rape assassinations (i.e. Drip and the Redneck Trees) are tasteless and unethical? Well, you could have S&S decide that that's the only thing that could possibly be bad enough for them, and then have a moment where they look at each other and agree that Laburnum and Foxglove must never, ever find out about this.
That, or you could do a reenactment of Tybalt Montlet's death. You know, from Suicide for Hire.
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Don't be nervous :) by
on 2010-06-20 04:33:00 UTC
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Permission-getting isn't scary, I promise. Even in the worst-case scenario, that of being outright rejected with a list of areas of improvement, it's only a question of working on your problems and re-applying. We all want to give everyone Permission, you know - it's not an exclusive club.
In any case, I'm afraid I can't give you a firm answer today as I'm in a hurry today and have no time to read your sample, but as a PG, the first thing I notice is that you have a few tense and punctuation issues in your request ("Neotopia[no comma] to be precise"; "Centurio has a persona of businessman, a spoof of robots being mindless drones. He usually acted all"), as well as one glaring typo ("campassion"), the former of which I believe has been mentioned below. This doesn't bode well. Obviously, you can't edit the post anymore, but based on this, I would hesitate to give you Permission without knowing you'll have a beta-reader to work with, at least for your first few missions.
From what I see here in the profiles, your agents look fine; nothing too extreme and a fair amount of contrast between them, which could lead to some funny situations. My only negative-ish comment there is that I feel like I've seen these character descriptions before; is this your first Permission request? Because if so, there's someone who has very similar agents to you, and that's probably not much fun. Your agents will gain more individual quirks as you write them, of course, but at this point the most interesting thing I see is Joseph being described as a "pervert" - so perhaps you'll want to give them a little more individuality. You don't have to do so right now, though - not to get Permission. They're just fine for that.
Sorry again that I don't have time to read your writing sample and make an official decision - I'll try to come back and do so later if no other PG steps in, but I have a busy week ahead. Feel free to nag the others or repost your request in a week or so if no one has time (or I forget - it happens) to give a proper answer.