Hm... Either I'm improving, in which case Cassie will be pleased, or I've done some crazy Jedi mind trick so that you'll miss them all. The results should be amusing either way, thank you. :p
*cuddles plush*
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Well done! (Oi! Everyone go and read it, it's good!) by
on 2009-02-21 02:16:00 UTC
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(I should know, I've sent the last three months betaing it.)
Ahem. Yes. Well done, KG. As I've told you elsewhere, it's funny, and I particularly liked the Agent interaction. Marcus is great fun, with his "seen it all, done it all," attitude. We need more veteran Agents. There's a few from before Crashing Down, but I can't think of any Agents that are currently active from Reorg-era and before.
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Mission PLUG! by
on 2009-02-21 02:05:00 UTC
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http://rc5593.webs.com/mission1.htm
There you go, everyone. My first mission is finally complete, hope you enjoy it. My computer's buggered itself, but I was able to limp along to the ending. Hopefully more than one of you reads it. :P Wish I could say it was fun, but my next few I'll definitely enjoy writing more than I did this one, haha. Hope you like it though.
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Lovely mission, dear. by
on 2009-02-21 01:43:00 UTC
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Might I suggest linking your missions to your Agents' wiki pages? Sara's page claims that there are no missions in existence for them.
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I'd forgotten about that. by
on 2009-02-21 01:26:00 UTC
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The image says it all.
I actually have a solution to this. Female Pokémon, every so often, produce an Egg. The size, obviously, must vary from Pokémon to Pokémon. But anyway. The Egg, however, will do nothing if not subjected to the tender ministrations of a compatible male. (the shell's probably semi-permeable, so certain things can get through while everything that shouldn't can't.) The donation of genetic material occasionally provides egg moves, but more often than not simply does the whole sperm + ovum = zygote thing, and, however many days/weeks/months/steps later, tada, you have baby Pokémon of the mother's species. (Unless it's a Nidoran. Those are just special.)
It works. Really. ^^;
Do let me know if there's holes in my logic.
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Re: The Science of Pokémon by
on 2009-02-21 00:52:00 UTC
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Yeah, I was wondering about where the water would come from for the move surf. If they pull from the environment then does that mean that they can't use it if they are in a desert? I gave up analyzing it. You just have to be creative when you write and try to work around it.
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Ah, that's okay. by
on 2009-02-21 00:40:00 UTC
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I shall feed the Wargs on Suvians and they will be big and strong. Puppies!
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Should be, I'd assume. (nm) by
on 2009-02-20 23:13:00 UTC
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- And there's another question ... by on 2009-02-20 22:47:00 UTC Reply
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Interesting... by
on 2009-02-20 22:40:00 UTC
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A crossover with that fic would be both hilarious and confusing - sounds like good fun. Go for it, but be nice.
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I had like five people beta it at once. by
on 2009-02-20 21:31:00 UTC
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Call me paranoid, but that's just my way of making sure. Besides, I didn't know if you'd be on a month after my mission was done, heh.
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The mission isn't done yet, that's why it cuts off. :P (nm) by
on 2009-02-20 21:22:00 UTC
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Re: I'm a bit late as always, but welcome. by
on 2009-02-20 18:35:00 UTC
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Thank you! XD
Although the penguin is already trained to attack people when they say poultry. XD
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Correct. by
on 2009-02-20 18:10:00 UTC
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hS, in his infinite wisdom, created the DOGA Canon Analysis Device: it alters tenses, offers suggestions on what to do with a Sue, and can act as a two-way radio to HQ. A very useful piece of kit, but not so easy to get hold of. My Agents only got theirs because Nat didn't pay attention to what kind of CAD she picked up when she went to get a new one.
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Well, excuse me. by
on 2009-02-20 18:01:00 UTC
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Honestly, you could have waited. I'm here now, and believe me, I'm going to be thoroughly betaing that chapter even if you've published it. I'll be here tomorrow morning, so expect to get a talking to, young lady!
*hug* At least you've got on with it. Well done for that.
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I'm glad you acknowledge that. (nm) by
on 2009-02-20 17:50:00 UTC
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ou wouldn't have seen that, Troj. I fixed it. by
on 2009-02-20 17:29:00 UTC
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I spotted the mistake and put it right, being the helpful spelling freak and walking PPC encyclopaedia that I am.
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Alrighty, thank you. (nm) by
on 2009-02-20 17:13:00 UTC
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That was fast. by
on 2009-02-20 16:31:00 UTC
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I only found two typos. Excellent. And while I personally don't ship KuroFai, I might want to see where this AU goes.
Oh, and since you just happened to be the first person I talked to after beating Prinny: Can I Really Be The Hero?, you get a life-size Hero Prinny plush, complete with plush Prinny swords in the pouch.
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Thanks! I'll share it with you now. (nm) by
on 2009-02-20 16:10:00 UTC
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Re: 1st person fic question. by
on 2009-02-20 16:01:00 UTC
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Well, there are modified CADS for it. If nothing is used, then either one or both Agents are possessed by the Suevian spirit and act out the role of the Stu/Sue. It seems that removing said Agent from the story's plot by intervening can force the Sue into the third person, but the possession in that incident was incomplete.
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Wow...great job. by
on 2009-02-20 15:04:00 UTC
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Plot? I know not of this plot you speak of. It's amazing how you managed to salvage a good story from that pile of...osik.