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Posted on: 2018-07-01 22:19:00 UTC

Always fun to see characters who don't usually interact get a chance to do so.

"a grumpy alcoholic with emotional problems" - Yeah, that's roughly accurate. {= ) I don't think he's quite an alcoholic, but it was clearly just a matter of time had circumstances not intervened. (And circumstances were always planned to intervene, just not the ones that got there first.)

I think Talia's "What could have done this?" is a little overdramatic, but having just now checked out the soap reference, I guess it's part of the shtick. I'm not sure Talia was in on it at that point, though? I mean, she was actually worried about Tom; I wouldn't expect her to start joking around until she was sure he was okay. (Though I'm with Thoth that going missing for a few days in HQ isn't really as worrisome as one might think; these things happen.)

And if she WAS in on it then, she'd have only herself to blame if he did claim it was soap poisoning. Which is what I'd suggest to make the joke a little easier to pick up on: "If you claim it was soap poisoning, I'm going to murder you."

Cuz. Uh. I wouldn't have gotten it anyway, but at least it would've stopped my brain from reaching for the usual places oblique mentions of soap point to. >.<

Noticed a couple missing words:

- "So, have [you] seen him, big guy?"

- "I don't suppose you could use some magical [trick/ability/power/...] to track him down or something?"

Video games are a helluva drug. {; P

~Neshomeh

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