Subject: Yeaaah...
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Posted on: 2018-07-01 23:58:00 UTC

I'll confess, Talia's line was a tad overdramatic. I now recall a tiny voice telling me something like that when I was writing this.

I should listen to that tiny voice more often. It might be the voice of sanity and reason.

No, the correct line from here would have been more along the lines of "What the heck was it that got you like this?" or perhaps, "What the hell were you doing, I had to sit alone on shift, do you have any idea how boring that is?" Or something.

Ah well. For the rewrites, if I ever polish this one up.

Thanks for finding the missing words, by the way. That's always helpful.

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