Subject: Dumb question: is this canon?
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Posted on: 2018-05-13 01:58:00 UTC

I'm not entirely sure when I last read a mission that wasn't one I was writing, so I'm behind the times. Seems like this event would be important enough to get a full interlude, though?

Anyroad, this has the ring of truth to it, which is a good thing, but also makes it a little uncomfortable, because I'm also wondering just how much of this is based on real life. The dialogue in particular doesn't feel randomly distorted, but rather like a transcription.

Not much to nitpick here, and also I'm on a bus and getting close to my destination, so I guess I'll leave it at this: the piece is solid and it was effective at making me feel Ix's wooziness and the comfort of loved ones, so I reckon that's good!

~Neshomeh

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