Subject: Attempt at a review-shaped object
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Posted on: 2017-12-21 11:00:00 UTC

I can't comment much on kid-realism, I'll leave that topic to someone else.

I like the scene in general, and the whole "we're not gonna get married"/"are too" sounds like something that would happen.

Now, one thing I noticed is that the setting feels underdefined for how it's used. You're mentioning the fact that there's at least one table and that some are moving a bit, but I don't really have a sense of where anyone is or what the place they're in looks like outside of those briefly-mentioned details (and it feels like I should).

Title-wise ... "Totally-not-love and Games"? (It just popped into my head while writing the review)

- Tomash

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